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Shout what? I think there might be a significant chunk missing from the previous chapter.
Wasn't the name Thunder Ball?
How did he 100% complete this? When did he practice it?
Wasn't it 2000 just last chapter?
HA! "World of Warcraft"
You say four fireballs but you only mention three places. Are two of them in the same area?
Really impressive foreshadowing.
Minor issue. Vile should be vial.
Either way. I very much enjoyed reading it. Keep up the good work.
Um just a minor thing, you've got dragon scale twice.
Could it possibly be the talent itself that brought him back in time? It charges and then he gets a do-over but it couldn't go back too far before it's existence so he only got 3 hours.
I'm confused...when did they become a she?
Aaaaand it's still not fixed...
Wasn’t it a diamond staff earlier?
Is Ratia a man or a woman? All this changing back and forth of pronouns just breaks the continuity and makes it harder to keep reading...
Its supposed to be Life Spring. They correct it in the next chapter.
Good thing he found another way to make Ps then.
Just a continuity question, didn't he just throw the rifle to on of his soldiers earlier?
Why doesn't he copy the Ice Queen's strength stat before this?