man posted without checking his chapter lol.

go back to DC, I miss serly.

this has to be one of the best chapters. I've never see an emergency quest from the other side. that literally made me clap in excitement.

hand seals?

hey author great way to introduce myltiverse travel but I really have one concern. make sure our protagonist quickly visits serly to let her know what he is up to. I'm not sure what their dynamic is but I feel like he should so she doesn't feel ghosted or something. she might even enjoy a trip or two.

smash

normally i hate info dumps but this was q nice one, mostly because it Introduced something I haven't see before. The summary of the departments were not that long and i Iike how things were. it makes me wonder who brought about these changes. Nicely done.

250x

250-500x

5-7

++1

pidgin English is kinda like simplified English. Nigerian pidgin specific is English based.

nothing happened at all. you have to know where to end chapters.

I'm of the same opinion.

this whole special chapter thing is starting to drag. would have expected to get into the meat of this fanfic by now.

that's fine

1she deserves a W.

1

the story is cool, love the 2ay he is growing and developing. his interactions with people is portrayed very well. you do good work.