The writing quality wasn't great, updates wasn't stable as the author said which is understandable. but it's unique and new that made this story deserves a 5 star for motivation to the author, keep it up!

Very good! I like the concept of magic copying and the mc not being the strongest (at least not in the beginning) was a plus. I also like how the author builds the world background as I can foresee some rich families wanting to trample the Mc. (Tho no young master bullshit please.)

What about ann's mera mera fruit bruhhh

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Noice im been looking for a tensura fanfic good job man👍👍👍👍👍[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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HAHAHHAHAH LMAOOO Nice story man

Where's the item he get on quest on his first kill???

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I like your fanfic man the character development, the versatility of the mc's devil fruit dont drop it.[img=update] Thats all plus ULTRA! !! ![img=recommend][img=recommend]