SalukiSands
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SalukiSands4mthCommentedIs his plan... "your mom!" Wow. This is like evil genius.
'Although my sword currently cannot pierce her weakness, I have plenty of other weapons. And… who knows? Maybe if she is cooperative we can have a proper good time when it is all better'- SalukiSands4mthCommented
Raze half the world to the ground because your world was taken. Tribulations that none of them expected.
"That person saved him, but only a husk of him in some sense. Finding no means to motivate him, the one word that got him to react was 'revenge'. He trained with that person like a madman, making tremendous progress. And in the end, he became powerful enough to do what he wanted to do. He found and killed each and every person who hunted them down or helped hunt them, whether the help was big or small. He killed exactly 5 877 646 115 people over the course of several years, including the emperor, his generals, the family that raised him, any army soldier participating in the blockades or searches, any government official who commanded the troops and organized them and so on. In the process, the empire collapsed and five sects that cooperated with the hunt also disappeared, most of the influential noble families were nearly exterminated and the land was since never claimed by any government, with no one ruling it for countless years." - SalukiSands4mthCommented
It's rules 1 and 2 yall lol
"Certainly. Here-"The female disciple behind the counter blushed as she saw his smile and bashfully handed over a piece of jade to him. While the Wu Long before he remembered his past life did not know how to use his handsome appearance properly, the same could not be further from the truth when it came to the current Wu Long. His demeanor and gaze alone was able to make the bodies of these girls to heat up. - SalukiSands1yrCommented
Any good party of adventures is always going to care about looting the corpses and taking as much as possible. I'm glad they learned this lesson quickly lol
"Gosh! It's working!" her eyes shone brightly before jumping from one dead guy to another. She even laughed in excitement as if this was a Christmas present. - SalukiSands1yrCommented'Bring that damn package to me!'
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I'm just imagining them all becoming serious scavengers. They're gonna save people then ignore the people to start Harvesting supplies because they'll all be soo starved for coins lol
My words were enlightening to them as they all showed bright expressions before running after the lying dead monsters all around. I cleared more than half of the monsters' cores by now, but the group didn't clear more than one third of the monsters' other items. - SalukiSands1yrCommented
What a fire line and kick a delivery.
After dealing with the first one, I could easily pinpoint their weakness. My reason would be luck. We humans loved to believe in such an inexistent thing. - SalukiSands1yrReplied to Krindsr
Very impressed that you can Google. I did that too. Doesn't change the fact I've never heard anyone say that and no one I know has either.
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I guess I did learn something. But I won't be grateful for your rudeness. Thanks for everything else.
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Dude he is so oblivious. You think he would care just a bit about the forest where he left his rampant skeletons lol
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Language is the same age bro. Traces back to where all the other english came from. This wasn't super racist or anything either. Part of good writing is good vocabulary though. That matches both the speaker and the readers. Putting in words most people won't understand (like the large audience who has English as a second language, or anyone who doesnt use the slang) isn't good writing. Since we wanna pick it apart. I like the story. Keep your hate out of the comments and don't ruin it for anyone else. Whine about any country again and I'll report you.
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You scarf food, a verb for eating aggressively. You scoff at an imbecile. Spellcheck is a jerk its a simple mistake in the editing process. But please fix it. it threw me off and it would help your opener fulfill its epicness (I dig it).
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Scoff is something unrelated to eating food. Pfft amateur (an example of scoff) *almost any anime protagonist eating* (an example of scarfing)
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If I recall correctly they're on a path that was something like a stone or brick road...
In fact, if not for the fact that it was difficult to walk in the desert and the unbearable heat, and that he had to avoid the quicksand and monsters, Zhou Chen felt that with his current physical strength, he would only need three hours to finish the journey. - SalukiSands1yrCommented
What happened to not needing emotion and being the best assassin? He left you wives!!! How is he gonna get past his Dao oath??? Ma Moxi, don't make me hate you bro. You were so cool....
"I've just learned the truth recently, Miaomiao. My original body has already become a deity, and Hongjun has already shown him what you and Devil did. And oh, boy. He's pissed that you stole so many of his fated wives." - SalukiSands1yrCommented
So he bombed the whole timeline with his thumb thingy?? MiaoMiao is a terrorist guys...
As such, before the skill would end up failing and destroying both Miaomiao and the clone in the process, Miaomiao's Bite the Dust instantly destroyed the emerging timeline to send both their souls back here. - SalukiSands1yrCommented
Yeah bro... I didn't understand this when he was setting it up the first time. Enlighten me master Tian!
"Do you know what happened?" - SalukiSands1yrCommentedThe future looked hopeful. Lu Fengxian kept laughing as he was satisfied by Miaomiao and Ma Xingjuan's genes.
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I love Autin Powers!!! He doesn't make me randy because I'm not gay, but he's taught me how to make ladies randy! And that's good enough. Better father than my dad who went to get cigarettes...
Miaomiao mimicked Austin Power's gesture and pointed his fingers at her, "Yeah, baby. Yeah! You know what I want!" - SalukiSands1yrCommented
Our boy is up in here about to save the entire Xie clan lols
Miaomiao smirked at them. He turned around and looked at Guo Jia, Sima Yi, Xie Tian, Xie Qingtian, and Xie Lian.