Oops, forgot to delete the 'all' part. It was supposed to be 'a powerful being'. I really need to proofread my stuff, sorry for the inconvenience`(*>﹏<*)′

Changed my account name (altho it still has W1N5T0N in it) after a few months because people kept on thinking it was still in this account, just look at the name next to the first comment (second and this one as well) that I posted. Thank you :).

T-T very sorry, I will fix it (Altho it might take a few days, I'm sorta lazy and forgetful o(TヘTo)). Thanks for telling me, and for your kindness while writing this. Am very thankful you read and enjoyed *cries with joy*.

Hmm, I don't usually comment on stuff, so ignore this if you want, but this is really interesting. You don't have many mistakes, just make the sentences longer and add a little more detail to them. Your wording could use a little help, but it's good. Keep writing and practicing, just let it flow, when you're done, add more detail, and fix your sentences. You'll get better, that's for sure. Good luck with writing, I would hope you continue, but that is up to you. As I said, good luck and good work.

Great novel so far, but sometimes when the characters are talking I can't tell who is talking to who (that might just be me, probably is just me), there aren't many mistakes or any at all. The story plot is unique and exciting. The character's individual personalities are clearly stated through the author's words and the way he/she writes.

Thanks, I'll try to post more chapters when I have time. I'm not a really good multi-tasker, so please don't get your hopes up or I'll feel really bad if I can't make more chapters on a daily basis like I probably should be doing, as you can tell by my release dates, I'm lazy (._.')

I love that series too! Thank you!

I loved reading this novel, I couldn't stop scrolling. It is easy to read and flows easily. Time flies by while reading this beautiful, unique novel.