Balling

Hinata is 14, the mc is 17(much older then that mentality) and is being set up to get with her. This is creepy as fuck. I don’t care that some cultures in the real world have diddy defenders but this is a Naruto fanficton and I don’t need to see a 14 year old be sexualized. “The world of Naruto is dark tho” I don’t care. The mc does not need to engage in it and in most fics, they don’t. Simple as that.

I don’t give I shit that disgusting things happen in the real world they don’t need to happen in the fic

My only gripe for the story is that the author is setting up a romance for the mc with a 14 year old Hinata while he’s 17. I think it’s creepy af and the story would be better without. Besides that, it’s good. Although I did hope to see more original Fuinjutsu techniques and we instead get a shitty flying thunder god but whatever

Because she’s 14

This isn’t real life you troglodyte, all of my points still stand and you just basically just said kys for literally no reason?

I mean I guess he worked for the powers technically through fame points, but again the points just make him seem shallow as everything he does seems to boil down to “I actually just needed more points and that’s why I’m acting this way”

(Ch 40) The story in my opinion would be significantly better if the jjk system never existed. This would be much better if the bs system didn’t exist because it just feels like the mc never worked for his powers whatsoever. He just has fire, telekinesis, infinite, healing, etc, etc and all without working a day in his life for it. That and the fame points thing makes the mc seem incredibly shallow with no real goals besides just gathering attention for more points. So you may ask “how would he have jjk powers then?” Telekinesis. Using a cleaver use of telekinesis you can have literally most jjk powers, infinity, red, blue, cleave, dismantle, normal telekinesis. This way he actually works to grow his power in a natural and fun way while still being powerful. “What about puppet manip, fire and healing?” Simply don’t have them. Why does the mc need to be a god? I really don’t understand this. Besides, just have Mechamaru as his own character, with his own goals and aspirations. It would have been much much cooler if we have an character that kinda rivals the mc with cool fights and actual stakes instead of just knowing for a fact that there is zero danger or risk whatsoever because both people are the mc. Also, the multiverse stuff sucks imo, actually end the story with a good conclusion instead of keeping on life support with traveling to a different world after you become a god of the first one. Besides all that, the story is good. I like the charater interaction and the dialogue is funny.

..no, you made go look for it and I can’t find it so I guess it doesnt exist. There is this image of cell being equal to cell juniors and the cell juniors being around that pl. I don’t think this is official so take it with a grain of salt

Cell’s power level is around a 1-3 billion, there’s a guidebook for it

What the sigma