Lanthor

I don't know with what is written right now it feels rushed itself and Anthony's abilities are being nerfed to not do what they were written as doing. I enjoy the extra lore parts too but I'd rather the story be coherent and match what was written before than just getting 2/3 of a chapter that is about an excerpt from a book in the world. Like cool we get to find out more about the other Ancients and what the people think about them. Also Oh no Anthony is being corrupted by something that is affecting him physically and mentally and his abilities that combat that and get stronger the more ants are near him aren't doing anything. Like even a Paragraph saying that the Altar and Versicle are trying to work but the will power isn't enough would have been fine but no just swept under the rug not mentioned just hey Anothy hit max level from a Wave where he was killing Tier 1 fresh spawned monster the entire time so let's just evolve him instead of go into detail about what is happening to him. The quality has seriously dropped can't go back to see it either unless you find an online pirates version or buy the books that were physically published too like in the beginning we got chapters about every little thing chapters were longer and more involved now this chapter for instance is like what 500 to 1000 words? (or i just read it fast) anyway I hope it gets better I really do.

Leaving Comments is how you show you don't like something I can leave comments it's not toxic it just me expressing my disappointment with a chapter. I've read from the beginning too. I've love this book but it sucks when stuff isn't kept consistent. His Organs state explicitly that they get stronger the more he is near his family, The Palidans get pulled into his will church when he is under threat there so why would he still have bad thoughts from a few chapters ago not the haha dark Anthony, It's not about lacking imagination or being toxic it is just bull that Anthony's main thing that got buffed the entire time he was evolving as a paragon are being made out to be weaker than they were written as. It like RinoZ is just speed writing without considering how things would interact. It isn't Toxic to leave a comment calling something bad y'all gotta get over yourselves attacking someone for having an opinion.

Insulting people is sad think about it

I can actually it how you voice your option.

His Organs abilities, The way the Ooze was explained to corrupt, The Palidan Skills all make this "problem" with the Ooze impossible to have happened. The Organ is explained to refresh him physically and mentally somewhat so the Ooze spreading is difficult to believe. The Ooze is said to corrupt things both physically and mentally. The Palidan are helping to fight it off mentally? All these plot holes are being shoved under the rug because The Ooze is from an Ancient. Oh boy how convenient. Not to mention that the Will Organs get stronger the more ants near him the Stronghold has over 1 million ants in it rn and prob more in range than that of his organs and they are losing to Ooze that was left there over centuries so your telling me that some goop hasn't lost any potency over centuries sure that makes sense Considering that the Heart has been using said Ooze to pump the rest of this later of the strada with Corruption. Yes Stories need drama and suspense but the drama/suspense should be logical and coherent to the established story and right now it is not.

F it I'm done I'm full dropping it I give up I tried to get back into it after the whole oh no one of my siblings got taken in the city of light and i didn't notice until after they were dying but this is just stupid. Hey let's go re read what the Will organs did again let's also go look at what the Corrupting ooze does let's also go look at what the ant based Palidan class does The oh no he is being corrupted thing just doesn't work it is a poor excuse to make fake drama that falls short if the author just remembered what half the things he made do. Maybe instead of Pushing for more of the book to be published physically you map out the rest of the book properly so we don't have garbage like this anyway Folks enjoy the rest of this dumpster fire.