Saint_Grey
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Saint_Grey3 years agoPostedThe author has written an excellent piece. Scenes are well-explained, and there are some amusing moments. We'll crafted suspense at the end of each chapter, the author certainly understands how to pique the reader's interest. The update stability is also a significant plus for this book. I would definitely recommend it to anyone else.
- Saint_Grey3 years agoCommented
[1st paragraph] A very good start for a novel, and what I can say is that the author did a very good description to help paint the scenes better in our minds. But I also noticed that the authors writing stile is too informal, and I advise him to make use of any editing tool like 'quillbot' which I also use on some occasions. [2nd paragraph] A great start to a story, and I can say that the author did an excellent job of describing the scenes to help us see them better. However, I noted that the author's writing style is too casual, and I recommend that he utilize an editing tool such as 'quillbot,' which I also use on occasion. [3rd paragraph] The second paragraph is identical to the first, except that it has been edited by Quillbot to make it more professional and remove unnecessary filler words. Same with this paragraph.
- Saint_Grey3 years agoCommented
A young and weak boy *who* seemed...
This paragraph has been deleted. - Saint_Grey3 years agoReplied to LORDOFORIGINALINK
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- Saint_Grey3 years agoPosted
There's not much for me to say. Overall, this novel is a fantastic piece, and it is evident that the author put a lot of effort into it. The author's description is superb, probably one of the best I've seen. The interaction between the different characters is on another level entirely, and not bland like so many other novels. This novel has a specific uniqueness that intrigues the reader and makes them crave for more. But I think the only flaw it has is the update rate. If only the author could update this book regularly, it would definitely rise through the ranks in no time.
- Saint_Grey3 years agoCommented
Keeps getting better
- Saint_Grey3 years agoCommented
A very promising beginning 👍
- Saint_Grey3 years agoPosted
A very nice story with one of the best descriptions I've seen. Got me hooked right from the first chapter. And also, the way the author ends with suspense is another bonus to the story. This book will definitely top the charts if it is updated regularly and has a better cover put on it.
