Private_Citizen
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Private_Citizen1mthCommentedMake it happen please.
"At this rate, I will become a giant," Aur shook his head helplessly.- Private_Citizen2mthCommented
Still tiny if compared to other dragons.
Bruce had grown impressively, now a formidable presence in the forest. His length stretched over thirteen meters, his height at the shoulder towered over seven meters, and his wingspan reached an awe-inspiring eighteen meters. His form, now more imposing and perfectly proportioned than any green dragon of his age, spoke of his unique evolution. - Private_Citizen4mthCommented
Beautiful writing. But how about a hug for Kilnick and a nuzzel from the dragon?
She turned to Kilnik and the dragon looked at him and bowed low in respect. Tate didn't need a bond with Kilnik to know what the dragon was saying. - Private_Citizen9mthCommented
Too bad. I like it when characters use their enormous form to simply tank everything to rubble.
Zhang Nu felt that too large a form will be inconvenient, so baring cases where he's facing special battles, he'll otherwise be using this current form as his main one. - Private_Citizen9mthCommented
How can his wings be that big if hes smaller than before?
He flapped his ginormous wings, and a shockwave of wind-carrying black frost and purple solar corona exploded out, rolling straight toward the incoming tsunami of grudges. - Private_Citizen10mthCommentedCh 524 June 1
- Private_Citizen11mthCommentedYou have unlocked a new elemental fusion of the apocalypse domain: Solar Flare.
- Private_Citizen11mthCommented
Imagine him gathering other dragon souls to become a true dragon king/emperor.
You have awakened, rekindled, and repurposed the last remnants of the dead dragon left behind to form a sub-soul. You have two hearts and two souls. You are now a dual dragon, two dragons in one. - Private_Citizen11mthCommented'Fifteen thousand? What can be so expensive? That is more than twice my total META points from before. Yes, do it.' He already went into it, so he decided to continue even though his heart hurt just thinking about the staggering cost.
- Private_Citizen1yrReplied to TemplarUhhh
Read above. Marv stuck a arm in to turn the water on. He thought it was just a pained shout of cold water hitting skin. He didn’t see anything.
I coughed, spluttered, then sighed and bowed my long neck, letting the icy water cascade across my metallic scales. I stared for a moment at my forepaws where they pressed against the shower wall, then down further to the ruined pair of boxer shorts that now hung in rags from my draconic hips. Slightly sober, I quickly clamped down of the rising expansion feeling. - Private_Citizen1yrCommented
How big is he going to be then? Tall enough for a castle to touch his chest when on all fours?
'Only three levels to my second evolution, and I will be able to evolve two times in one go, plus I will evolve all of my powers at once and surprise the vampire with my large power jump, instantly overwhelming him.' - Private_Citizen1yrCommented
I would mention here that he stopped flaming the camp. the sentence feels wrong without it.
The whole city turned so quiet that no one even dared to breathe. Vesuvius looked at the still-present mass of volcanic explosion that floated in the air, frozen by his will. - Private_Citizen1yrCommentedCh 52 Caught
- Private_Citizen1yrCommentedHe stood up, his body rising out of the magma with hot fluid flowing down his body as he stretched his wings. He felt like everything around him was smaller. He even felt that his pool of mana grew.
- Private_Citizen1yrCommented
You can have it go away for a bit, but when it comes back online, have it reward him based on everything he has done.
(AN: Please let me know by voting in paragraph comment about how you feel about the system vanishing for a significant amount of chapters. If you don't like it, let me know with your votes, and I will use my contingency plan to get the system back sooner!) - Private_Citizen1yrCommented
Godzilla anyone?
Vesuvius grabbed more than ten glowing orbs with his consciousness, making them float towards his breath glands. His excitement grew as he imagined the changes it would bring to his breath. - Private_Citizen1yrCommentedCh 198 The First Metamorphosis
- Private_Citizen1yrCommented
Guess he got over not eating humans..
Vesuvius closed his mouth, enjoying the taste of the fresh juicy meat while looking at the cheering players, noticing a few individuals that got nervous, their sweating intensifying and their heartbeat increasing. - Private_Citizen1yrReplied to Ghost_Playing
Did he say state in a previous chapter that V would never eat a human?
The elite hunters used that time, once again launching themself towards the dragon-like arrows. They swissed through the air and pierced through the veil of dark smoke. The weapons fell once on the hard volcanic stone. Their blades split the stone and spread cracks through its surface. From the cracks gushed out a hot magma slowly mending them. - Private_Citizen1yrCommented"But, we have only one ballista remaining..."