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CyprianNasat

CyprianNasat

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Just A bread passing by

2020-07-14 JoinedMalaysia
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  • CyprianNasat
    CyprianNasat2yr
    Replied to Reigetsu_kun

    And I do take Borading School Juliet as a reference for my writing

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  • CyprianNasat
    CyprianNasat2yr
    Replied to Reigetsu_kun

    Haha...I don't want to say it rasicm but it's kind the word for it but them also want to fix that by bulid those academy....but as you read it... it's not that easy.

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  • CyprianNasat
    CyprianNasat2yr
    Commented

    Thank Yuu~ and If you could.... would you mind leave a review on the main page? and thanks again

    Ch 4 First Day...Is Finally Over
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  • CyprianNasat
    CyprianNasat2yr
    Replied to Kurosaki_neko

    Thanks yuu~

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  • CyprianNasat
    CyprianNasat2yr
    Replied to Kurosaki_neko

    Yes of course she was ... any mom will do that ... I guess?

    "I'm sorry .... Rieal .... if you're old enough later .... you'll know ... yes ... you'll know ... huh ... huh ..."
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    Nations Harmony Academy
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  • CyprianNasat
    CyprianNasat2yr
    Posted

    Reading the short story part ... makes the story enough to grab my attention already....good use of grammar and anime -style writing style which I myself am quite familiar with....overall,I really like this style of writing and I hope you continue to write it and don't leave because it's a pity if you don't continue this good story ...so keep up your efforts and I am always behind supporting you.

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    Rainy Rose
    Book&Literature · Kurosaki_neko
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  • CyprianNasat
    CyprianNasat2yr
    Posted

    Not much I can say about it .... I have a mix of feelings about the story but I will continue to keep reading it because why do I feel that way .... so do I like it or not?....Yes,I like it, it's still interesting to read ... it's just that it might take time for me to really understand the story.

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    Morphing Iniquity
    Teen · Tailrs ink
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  • CyprianNasat
    CyprianNasat2yr
    Posted

    Overall ... the story is good and I understand what you want to convey to the reader...you just have to correct your grammatical mistakes and the use of "he/she" because sometimes, female characters are called "he".....So I suggest you to re -read your story after writing it before publishing it here...That's all I saw through my reading earlier ... if you can correct the mistake I mention earlier I guarantee your story will be better and more interesting.

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    Misfortune~
    Others · bluexubyung
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  • CyprianNasat
    CyprianNasat2yr
    Commented

    Hmm ... your writing is very simple but easy to understand for most readers whether new or old readers ...Although I haven't finished reading it yet, I think it looks interesting .... Girls who know how to fight? ... heck yeah, that my type of female leas, especially stories like this

    Ch 1 The Stoic Warrior
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    Oh My Demon Lord
    Fantasy · immortal_shizu322
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  • CyprianNasat
    CyprianNasat2yr
    Replied to immortal_shizu322

    Thank Yuuu!~

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  • CyprianNasat
    CyprianNasat2yr
    Commented

    Wow...how do you able to gain 1k only for few day?... might sharing?

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