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VinixxVidixxVici

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I am a pessimistic person who has no clue how the beta personality shit heads actually beat the villain. I average around 1k words/chapter and upload once a day. Also I am on fanfic and webnovel.

2020-07-12 JoinedIndia
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  • VinixxVidixxVici
    VinixxVidixxVici8mth
    Replied to Scientistx

    May I ask what’s wrong or can be done better in this story, I wanna try and be better

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  • VinixxVidixxVici
    VinixxVidixxVici8mth
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    Hi, author here. My second hand at Pokemon, hopefully much better as well. I have improved my writing a bit since the last one. Please give me some constructive criticism so that I may improve

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  • VinixxVidixxVici
    VinixxVidixxVici1yr
    Commented

    Wait for a second, a master trainer is below and elite and champion trainer, but a master Pokemon is higher than both elite and champion? That makes no sense. If you wanted you could have made master the highest class of trainer to make it consistent because now an elite trainer will a master Pokemon and a master trainer will have a champion pokemon

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  • VinixxVidixxVici
    VinixxVidixxVici1yr
    Replied to Daichi_TBR193

    The returning prisoner, whose eyes have become accustomed to the sunlight, would be blind when he re-enters the cave, just as he was when he was first exposed to the sun (516e).[2] The prisoners, according to Plato, would infer from the returning man's blindness that the journey out of the cave had harmed him and that they should not undertake a similar journey. Plato concludes that the prisoners, if they were able, would therefore reach out and kill anyone who attempted to drag them out of the cave (517a).[2] Wikipedia

    "Sure." The owl started to lay out the Pai Sho pieces as Zuko poured more tea for the two. "There once were three men in a cave. They are all bound by their hands and feet to a rock in which all they could see was a wall. Behind them was a fire that was casting shadows on the wall. All of their life these men have been bonded there, never to move, staring at the same wall. To them, the wall was their whole life and they knew nothing outside of this wall. One day a great earthquake shook the land and one of the men became free from his bindings. After he was free he began to look behind him and noticed he was in a cave and that the shadows that he saw only came from the fire that blazed behind them. He then stood up and walked out of the cave to see this great big world living and going on all around him. Excited he rushed back to the other men still bonded. He told them of all the great things he had seen, but they didn't believe him."
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  • VinixxVidixxVici
    VinixxVidixxVici1yr
    Commented

    Does’nt that story end with the humans being unable to accept the fact that their entire lives were a lie, and them going back into the cave, never returning to the surface because their brain couldnt comprehend what was happening?

    "Sure." The owl started to lay out the Pai Sho pieces as Zuko poured more tea for the two. "There once were three men in a cave. They are all bound by their hands and feet to a rock in which all they could see was a wall. Behind them was a fire that was casting shadows on the wall. All of their life these men have been bonded there, never to move, staring at the same wall. To them, the wall was their whole life and they knew nothing outside of this wall. One day a great earthquake shook the land and one of the men became free from his bindings. After he was free he began to look behind him and noticed he was in a cave and that the shadows that he saw only came from the fire that blazed behind them. He then stood up and walked out of the cave to see this great big world living and going on all around him. Excited he rushed back to the other men still bonded. He told them of all the great things he had seen, but they didn't believe him."
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  • VinixxVidixxVici
    VinixxVidixxVici1yr
    Replied to palesteblue_

    Nope. I am serious, you can adopt if you want. Just tell me the name of the story, I am very intrested in other peoples version of my story.

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  • VinixxVidixxVici
    VinixxVidixxVici1yr
    Replied to palesteblue_

    Sure go for it.

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  • VinixxVidixxVici
    VinixxVidixxVici1yr
    Posted

    This is basically a uchiha fans wet dream. But great story. Loved reading it and great potential, hope it doesn’t decline but considering the authors quality, I don’t think that will happen

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  • VinixxVidixxVici
    VinixxVidixxVici1yr
    Replied to the_fat_taoist

    Can not disclose. The only thing I can confirm that it was called “a” intentionally.

    'Well that was quite a rant but I have decided you belong in...
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  • VinixxVidixxVici
    VinixxVidixxVici1yr
    Commented

    Am I the only one here who actually understood the whole Paragraph becuase i spend my free time researching abstract Advanced physics

    We live in four dimensions,Time is the 4th dimension. Our dimensions are defined by space which has three dimensions (the x, y, and z axes), and time (t) which is the 4th dimension. There can be nothing like "4th dimensional beings" exclusive of the three dimension of space. There is no such thing as a 'time-being' really… We are it (along with other life-forms here) as four dimensional beings, so far from the little we know, and within the limitation of the knowledge of the four dimensions mostly. Now what about other dimensions, the so called 5th, 6th, 7th, 8th, 9th, 10th, and 11th, the hyperdimensional manifolds that the string theorists are dealing with ?? Well these have been postulated to exist with us, inside our constituent particles, as inner manifolds that make up everything. It appears now that anything, from a life-form to an object, anything at all is composed of all these dimensions, currently 11 in number ! The 'Calabi-Yau' manifolds are the mathematical hyperdimensional structural entities composed of the extra dimensions that exist within all things according to super-string theory or theory of everything. They must also exist in space and time. The eleven dimensions have to exist together, the four of which are easier to understand, and the remaining seven are highly intricate. Now from the knowledge of Hilbert space, and the Hilbert-Einstein collaborations we know there can be an infinite number of vectors that can exist around the Hilbert space. If the concept is extended to dimensions, theoretically there can possibly be an infinite number of dimensions which we know nothing about. It leads to mathematical abstractions that we do not have the mathematics for, needless to say ! Whether these other unknown dimensions can have their own energetic entities that can criss-cross our known dimensions, from "out of nowhere" to us, or whether they simultaneously exist unseen and unbeknownst to us with occasional intended or unintended overlaps, we do not know. What is also true is that if these other dimensions ranging to infinity truly exist, then our existence may have unknown links to these as well, though we do not know anything about these dimensions or their ramifications with ours… So theoretically and conceptually inter-dimensional beings may be possible, and they may or may not have difficulty interacting with our "sphere" if you will. But forget 11th dimensional beings, humans can't even hope to comprehend how a 4th dimensional being sees reality.
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  • VinixxVidixxVici
    VinixxVidixxVici1yr
    Replied to DaoistbliZ012

    Dont worry i haveut planned Out and also the nextchap will be tomorrow

    Ch 40 Rewrite chapter 4
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  • VinixxVidixxVici
    VinixxVidixxVici1yr
    Replied to DaoistbliZ012

    I agree.

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  • VinixxVidixxVici
    VinixxVidixxVici1yr
    Replied to Shadewind

    Please check it now. I think i fixed it

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  • VinixxVidixxVici
    VinixxVidixxVici1yr
    Replied to VinixxVidixxVici

    I fixed it. hopefully it works

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  • VinixxVidixxVici
    VinixxVidixxVici1yr
    Replied to Balu1995

    Fixed the formattimg error

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  • VinixxVidixxVici
    VinixxVidixxVici1yr
    Replied to Jake_Zajirne

    Is that True? Becuase ym formatting looks normal. let me tryand fiX it.sorry for the issue

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  • VinixxVidixxVici
    VinixxVidixxVici1yr
    Replied to Shadewind

    I fixed the spacing issues on the story. Check if it is still there becuase if it is, then there is an issue on your end. sorry about the original upload not having proper spacing, I switched my formatting tool and there were a few kinks to work out

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  • VinixxVidixxVici
    VinixxVidixxVici1yr
    Replied to Na1gel

    Dont worry. I am focusing on the childhood for a very specific reason.

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  • VinixxVidixxVici
    VinixxVidixxVici1yr
    Replied to omegaverseTraveler

    Trust me. i have been on the receiving end of an author shutting down a fic and starting a new one for no reason. even if i take a break, i plan to finish my sotry no matter what happens.

    Ch 37 Rewrite chapter 1
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  • VinixxVidixxVici
    VinixxVidixxVici1yr
    Replied to Mateus_Belmond

    I actually agree with most of your negative points. Keep in mind this was my first ever fanfic and I agree that it was a dumspter fire. however, i will be acknowledging all these issues in the rewrite i already began writing

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