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Thx for the chapter. imho, not yet dark enough😂 I think you can cook something more with mother. For example, she had ROS disease from Tokyo Ghoul, because organization behind the lab experimented on how to multiply RC-cells in humans. And that can be one of reasons why Ken was such a good lab rat - those multiplied RC-cells was devoured by him in her belly. So he got the best acquired+genetic aptitude for being a ghoul and highest RC-cells count for human. Oh my god, also his father can be working at this lab. And modern medicine can falsely recognize ROS as a kind of cancer. And I hope his schizophrenia will grow stronger so that woman will keep telling him to accept being ghoul and mother can be just warm reminder of being human. Someone might even notice his dialogues with those personas. And I'm very interested - will there be Haise Sasaki and how he will come to exist? Will he kill someone important or endure Rize-like existence in lab aka kakuhou breeding tool for some time? I think lab 100% will have kakuhou farms. Be it for quinque or transplantation.

Complete freedom is to severe yourself from all connections and even all possible connections that might affect you. It won't make you happy. It will only make emotionless with time. And the best method of attaining this was picking omni-kinesis and then wiping all sentient beings in universe. With this you will never be affected by another mind except your own. And MC picked power, part of which is giving power to another beings. If he doesn't want to brainwash them, then he won't use full potential of his power. And if he will use it, then he is just contradictory af. But maybe author wants it, idk. It will be good if MC will understand his own misbelieves and correct them - it's called character development.

The most challenging was No kill rule (especially with other debuffs that add enemies) and Weakness (can make you from literally invincible to the easiest to kill). Can't understand why those two give only +2, especially when another +2 is just group of haters with no powers. You will pick them only if you were highly in debt at this point. But you wouldn't even if you picked up omni-kinesis, at least because you wouldn't need so much spending on perks. Feels like a filler options.

Sorry for complaining, but MC wants freedom so he willingly cuts one of the most OP paths... I have no words. BUT if magic only means energy from Marvel dimensions I highly agree. Incapability to get in debt with Marvel devils sounds more like a kind of protection.

So comparing this pair of omnipotency + 100m range is like giving man a gun and say to him "You can only use this gun if you use it with your hands".

Omni-kinesis was highly degraded by MC, especially with his objective - FREEDOM. Even with 100m range (which already is quite good for omnipotence power) he is already free to do everything he wants, being invincible and even granting himself and his possible allies powers, not needing to steal them. The only problems are: 1. Knowledges (if his power doesn't work with just imagination). Well, if Omni-kinesis requires knowledge then just go study physics for temporarily protection and biology for immortality. Then eventually you will be able to do anything. 2. Range. When he will be able control his powers on highly enough level then he can just erase concept like range or swap it with other concept like time or stretch it or all of the above combined. The only downside is the starting point when he is constricted to 100 meters, so another Omnipotent being can counter him. But compared to ability theft power even creating abilities is on another level. So MC is either stupid or yes. Plus he is contradictory - he said that he doesn't want strings that come with relationships, but choosing the power to grant the power to others...

+1

Good story. Quite enjoy it. Waiting for more.

Amazing start. I'm very interested. Waiting for updates. Have the same feelings as 5Entity (the first reviewer).

Great 2 chapters. Waiting for more. Waiting...