Heobow87

It's a cool concept for a book and it started very well, but i have to drop this for the contradictions in Tophs actions. One moment she's telling batman the she wont hesitate to kill people for her goal and the next she's worrying about hurting people while bringing down a single small ish building. The writing is good with a few spelling and grammatical errors but I cant get past the constant contradictions where Toph views humans as both villains and victims

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tyftc

tyftc

Don't you just love how people don't understand how grenades work?

tftc keep up the good work!

ARC Raiders anyone?

there are some modern revolvers though? Only larger one's have alot of recoil. Also is it a single or double action revolver?

viltrumites have tactile telekinesis that lets them do stuff like that. Kryptonians have something similar but it's there bio-electric field

I forgot to add, this was inspired by another fanfic where the killing curse just severed the connection between the victim's soul and body which would mean instant death. That same fanfic also explained how the torture curse would forcefully alter the souls frequency, causing unbearable pain, and that enough exposure to this would gradually make the victims soul go out of sync with their body's. Just some thoughts. Keep up the good work! :)