Why the sudden rank change? The Lin Ling girl is the first lieutenant and he's a Lieutenant Colonel

That's good to hear cause it's really a great story. I used to write but nothing on par with this

Please don't give up on this story -line ! It's one of the best stories I have read yet and though I am reading free right now I have absolutely no problem spending coins to read the rest. This story is intriguing and very attention grabbing I am seriously wishing for the full story! Can't wait to see what else you come up with. I believe you are a very promising writer! Thank you for the awesome story so far and hopefully more to come

Hey, this is a great story and I have read a couple of your other stories but do you have any idea how annoying it is to pay this much to read a book and find out that you are paying to read max 4-5 paragraphs of new content per chapter !?!? Why do you repeat half the last chapter, all those stats all the time and copies of each explanation for the skills. And half a chapter dedicated to promoting all the other books every chapter . I know you have to have so many words per chapter and so many chapters per week or whatever but come on, you're basically ripping us off.

Once again you amaze me! Your writing style is awesome, your imagination is brilliant and overall you do not lose in any way many of the great authors that I have read on Webnovel nor to any of the amazing authors I have read throughout the thousands of books I have read over the years! You are one of the greatest I've had the pleasure of reading and I hope you take this to heart and continue your writing And please, as a favor to me and the rest of your fans, start trying if you haven't already to write us a book a series if possible. We as the fans that read your stories, know you have it in you to be one of the best! Please take this to heart as I truly believe that not only I but all your fans believe in you !

Don't worry about the ones that intentionally disrupt your thoughts they're just trying to get in your head to cause you problems with your writing because they're jealous. They don't have the imagination nor the insight that you have and use when you write! Just continue to do your thing I expect to see you in paperback and hardcover one day! Just make your first dedication to your writer name on here so your fans know who it is!

Already read most of your works. And I must say that in my humble opinion you are one of the best writers on Webnovel. Please keep writing

This is a great book every aspect I have explored has been filled with a beautiful yet at times frustrating as it should be. As things seem to be going great, a twist is thrown, kind of like real life, all in order same as life, what gets me is when real time greed sets in and the writer succumbs . Usually noticed by the readers , without even consciously realizing that the chapters are getting smaller and smaller causing the unsuspecting and loyal reader to spend more and more coins, just to finish a book that they put their heart, soul, support,money, and love for the writer into! Just to find out in the end, that they were betrayed for a few extra coins. This gentleman's book is good enough without all that, and should he just leave things as they were from the beginning he can looks forward to a solid customer fan base that will follow his every written word without any tricks. YOU are awesome! YOU are a great writer! YOU need no tricks! Do your thing and write for the people first, the money and fame will follow!

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Why is there nothing about his partial domain?

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