DemonicDog3

Do you what being free of something means?

Didn't he get teleported here and not know if it's safe or not?

Author I just want to know if the mc keeps being dumb and using that gez slang talk because it's a pretty big turnoff for me. Rest is 5/5

Can you give context?

Captain probably defeats him after a long drawn out fight if batman does not have the element of surprise. He himself has admitted that cap would probably beat him in a straight fight in a crossover comic.

The start is pretty solid and I'm just waiting for more chapters to do an in-depth review

grammar is pretty good and no problems so far

They weren't average hunters it was just that they were against God so ofc they would lose like most of the time

Don't get your panties in a twist grandpa

The chapter is pretty nice but I'm unsure about the personality you've chosen for the empty. It's pretty ooc