HeavenlyWritings

Same here. I checked out the authors discord and he has been dealing with a lot of health issues. He’s been in and out of hospital for a while. Currently he’s taking a 3 month break and hopefully it will go back to a regular schedule after that. He says it’s due to exhaustion but he hasn’t uploaded more than 30 chapters in the last 4 months so I doubt it. He’s probably got a more serious health issue. Hopefully he comes back healthy. If I were you I’d take a year long break from this novel and come back to it to reread everything again. I’ve already forgotten a lot of the details in this novel so that should be fun.

Not much has happened yet so I can’t say anything for sure but I’d like to tell you what I don’t like so far 1. Not explaining the power system makes it really confusing for the readers. We know he is rank 1 but what does that even mean? How strong is his sister? We need to know stuff like that so we have a goal to look forward and know when he’s close or catching up, if you don’t explain then although he’s progressing to mark 3 , mark 4 etc we don’t know what that even means in the grand scene of things so how can we as readers feel satisfaction in his progress? 2. I don’t know how others feel but Lumni is way too clingy, I get the fact that he saved her and she probably feels really close to him but it’s kinda annoying for readers to read. You introduce female leads way too early for some reason which ruins impression for readers. We want to feel a connection to the female lead and you placing her in here right from the start ruins the immersion. She just feels really out of place and like a random side character we don’t even care about. We don’t experience their first time meeting, it’s just like she has always been there which isn’t how you write a female lead. Im soeaking from a majority perspective here btw author. Like who tf even is lumi, we literally have no reason to care about her. She feels like a little sister more than a female lead.

I’m convinced everything about this books statistics are botted, there’s no way this book is this popular because I must not be reading the same book as the people writing reviews. The whole book is boring, I don’t know how else to explain it. The characters are boring, the world building is boring, the power system is boring, the mc just keeps getting new summons between every fight which makes his previous summons useless although the previous summons can still get stronger but there’s literally no point trying to make them stronger when he is getting stronger and stronger summons every 20 chapters. Reading this book feels like a bedtime story. There’s literally no emotions when reading this book it’s just bland af.

I’m up to date on chapters. After chapter 300 things just stop making sense, and it feels like the story is just getting dragged out for no reason, how can Selene be close to a 2 star already which is 20 accupoints filled out when it took moon 3 days of hunting just to fill in 1 accupoint. She literally had nothing when they were both together when the base was getting attacked. Author is just upping her power unexplainably for no reason other than for plot. Also what’s stopping moon from meeting the op characters and copying their skills? Clearly his skills aren’t good enough if the light swordsman and all the ascenders got a better average than him whilst his skill was already evolved to second order and they as newly evolved got 3k+ it just means that his skills just aren’t good enough because he should be way higher than them especially with how many extra stats moon has. I know that moon will get stronger because he has many skills and he can use each one to fill out a single accupoint but it still doesn’t make sense. Also the supreme beast core the first thing he thinks is to feed it to his mount? Really? He’s literally classless so he should be able to take the core for himself because he’s not restricted to any class path but instead he thinks to give it to his mount. I feel like at the current rate when he’s only filled out 1 accupoint and he’s already as strong as someone that has filled out 6 accupoints means that he will be insanely op in the near future so developing Selene and Yara doesn’t make sense because they will become way weaker than his soon. Unless author wants them to be burdenes to him. Because of this I don’t like the whole account thing needing to be filled in with skills because it just doesn’t make sense powerscaling wise unless the side characters are just forced into random power ups like Selene is currently getting.

I’m happy the author is back, I wasted 3 months of buying privilege so I won’t buy privilege again but I hope he’s in good health now :3

What if ash’kal is lying about not knowing the dealers lineage. Surely he must have gone to them to figure out a way to solve the three body problem. I refuse to believe ashkal didn’t go to them as they could have divined who has the best chance to succeed. That’s how he would have found Levi otherwise what are the chances that ashkal found Levi on earth when the radians themselves have stated that earth has a low potential so surely ashkal goes to a planet with a high potential to find a suitable partner? Also the bishop stated that someone requested a kill on Levi’s parents so what if Ashkal was also involved in that? That seems like the most plausible theory right now.

By the way I saw that you commented somewhere else that the mc will get over Jennifer. Yeah your not fooling anyone buddy, with the way you keep mentioning her and how the mc keeps longing for her, if Jennifer somehow has not reincarnated with him then whoever ends up replacing her won’t have a place in the readers eyes. Ik she will be introduced soon because I believe in your writing IQ author 😘

So who has Jennifer reincarnated into author🙃 you have hinted at it enough times now😉 I’m hoping that she will be decently op herself so that the MC doesn’t become another malrik for her 🤣

Author I think you should add a picture for each of the leads. Use Ai to generate them. It helps a lot with attracting readers :)

Are you dumb? You are acting like he doesn’t get power ups from his undead. If he was a pure necromancer then his undead wouldn’t affect his own body would it? He would just be a regular human if he was a pure necromancer. My point is that even though he is strong himself he never fights himself.