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liyanpark1013

liyanpark1013

Lv11

Life Goes On 💜✨ if you want to communicate with the author, you can contact me in discord. 😍 Discord: LiyanPark#1293

2020-07-08 JoinedPhilippines
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  • liyanpark1013
    liyanpark10131yr
    Posted

    this is promising story. it really hooked me up. I really love how Kate from being a strong woman and protected herself. however, it was confusing as if it is like a rough draft and haven't edit it yet. But overall, this is a good novel.

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    Domineering Billionaire Husband and His Arrogant W (A passionate Love)
    Urban · Eva_Smith_0875
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  • liyanpark1013
    liyanpark10131yr
    Replied to Eva_Smith_0875

    thank you! 💜

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  • liyanpark1013
    liyanpark10131yr
    Replied to NobleRemmy

    thank you! yours as well! ☺️☺️

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    Unwanted Love: The Pale of Moonlight
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  • liyanpark1013
    liyanpark10131yr
    Replied to Hibah_Siddiqui

    thank you! 💜

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  • liyanpark1013
    liyanpark10131yr
    Replied to DeYame

    thank you!

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  • liyanpark1013
    liyanpark10131yr
    Replied to KyMonica

    thank you!

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  • liyanpark1013
    liyanpark10131yr
    Posted

    I don't say much but this is a good novel! keep up the good work!

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    The Reddest Red
    Fantasy · blossoms_hkhk
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  • liyanpark1013
    liyanpark10131yr
    Posted

    Romance is my genre and also the one I've been working on and this hooked me up. Every author has a distinct writing skills and grammar and be fixed. Overall this is definitely worth to shot and update more to recognize this novel! keep up!

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    Colors of fate
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  • liyanpark1013
    liyanpark10131yr
    Posted

    It was an indeed good chapters by having a unique plot. Every chapters well detailed and explain really well. Some grammars needed to fix but it's still depends on the writing style of the author. Overall it's worth the hype! keep up!

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    MTE [moved to a new link]
    Fantasy · Hibah_Siddiqui
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  • liyanpark1013
    liyanpark10131yr
    Replied to liyanpark1013

    PS. i also not good in grammar hehehe goodluck!

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    The lighted lantern (Arelins)
    Teen · Annran
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  • liyanpark1013
    liyanpark10131yr
    Posted

    It was intriguing story from the given synopsis and it was a nice start. The grammar needed to fix in order to understand more but I know you have a potential creating unique story. I've read some of like this and it was very rare. I suggest if you want to make it lighter and more exciting, you can use onomatopoeia instead of using much punctuation. But overall, it was a good novel and highly suggested to the readers. keep up the good work Author!

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    The lighted lantern (Arelins)
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  • liyanpark1013
    liyanpark10131yr
    Replied to MITCHIEWilliams

    thank you! 💜

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  • liyanpark1013
    liyanpark10131yr
    Posted

    By reading the novel, it was a good plot and could see the intention of the author. The narration needed to be more detailed and the flaws of writing skills, it can develop in period of time. Keep up the good work! good luck author! 💜

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  • liyanpark1013
    liyanpark10131yr
    Replied to RomanceFanatic028

    thank you! 💜

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  • liyanpark1013
    liyanpark10131yr
    Replied to Original5

    thank you! 💜

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  • liyanpark1013
    liyanpark10131yr
    Posted

    another good novel to recommend for readers. it was easy to understand since it used simple words. The plot was nicely good especially it involves reincarnation such. overall it is a great novel!

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    The Reincarnated Emperor And His Scheming Concubine
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  • liyanpark1013
    liyanpark10131yr
    Posted

    This is a masterpiece. there's some hint of mysteries that could hook up the reader. it was also easy to understand since the author used simple words that confused the reader. Over all, it was an intriguing novel, keep up the good work, author-nim!

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    Red Blood Century
    Fantasy · RomanceFanatic028
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  • liyanpark1013
    liyanpark10131yr
    Posted

    It's not for me to review my own novel but I'm promoting this new novel I created. It was my fifth novel and this is one of my favorite! Please support my other novels! 'When Time Comes' 'The Guy in a Coffee Shop' 'Operation: Make Him Fall for Me!' 'Unwanted Love: Under The Pale of Moonlight'

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  • liyanpark1013
    liyanpark10131yr
    Replied to yohan26_

    thank you 💜

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  • liyanpark1013
    liyanpark10131yr
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    Providing a good concept of novel and made it intriguing from the first 12 chapters caught my attention. A fresh unique story to a vampire line really amazing. I don't say much but I recommended this to anyone who love BL! Wonderful start Yohaniee! 😘😘

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    [BL] Blood Lifeline
    LGBT+ · yohan26_
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