translation is so bad, story line is good. but having to reread it, each chapter, over, to understand it makes me stop for awhile, start different stories

errors in grammer

I already read it. that's how I knew about this story

so many errors, whose mom was it?? need a better translated. no proof reader

Why cant i get anychspyers past 197

Look forward to Your story

This wasnt translated good

Omgee i just love this story. she Is just so darn cute. she thinks she is doing everything. she is So protected my handsome grey eyes husband

I so love this evil against good. way better then skimming thru them *** scenes first novel

If uou want some help editing, let me know. there were so many errors. i was so upset paying the money i did. and the lousy translation, i cant translate but i can read and write english

but why do you charge so much, @webnovel, i would read so much more if it didnt cost 50 to read one novel

3 wasted chapters

wish i wouldve known you were going to waste good reading on sexual subjects. i pay for these chapters!! a little bit is good, but details just to waste writing space. let the imagination have its way

You have a lot of mistakes, the story is really good. But i wont party so much money again. not only your novels, but there are others.