Thanks for understanding brother 😁👍

Great Work! Overall Writing is good with no grammatical mistakes and smooth English sentences which are easy to understand, The plot is interesting and well written without any chaotic dialect which made this novel even more extraordinary so keep it up brother!

I'll try my best🙂

Thanks for your appreciation

Thanks brother no matter what you leave a bad review or good one I just appreciate it, I only wanted to tell you that I can't change the entire story just based on one request or even many requests otherwise it'll be messed up but once again thanks for your appreciation for my work and giving a good review, because I'm busy these days so can't upload new chapters but soon after 2-3 days I'll once again start to publish new chapters so please stay tuned.

Well it's not a big harem so it won't I can't disclose too much but that's all also the romance will develop slowly so it won't make the story bad or anything so please brother if you don't like this novel just doesn't give hate based on these tags if possible please avoid giving low reviews on the basis of these things thanks also I appreciate your opinion thanks for your review even it's not a good one

may I know why you want me to remove harem tag?

...Hey bro that's just because he hasn't used the system yet and just started to explore, also he's just a 16-year-old youngster so from that perspective it's not something extraordinary because if you know majority of the youngsters/teens are warm-blooded so that's why I wrote that line. Not from the perspective of System or he got Bei Xuan's memories, he'll use those things in future and same for his temperamental change I can not just let him become arrogant and used op techniques to deal with ordinary cultivators otherwise it'll ruin the taste of readers who prefer reading a good story without an arrogant male lead. Also brother it's my first novel so some mistakes I can't just help with so sorry for that and Thanks For Your Support @CHAND!

Thanks for showing your enthusiasm, I really appreciate it. Hope you like my work!

This novel is just like a play, a good concept keep it up buddy!

well honestly I'm also of those readers who like to read in bulk just I'm really busy these days so that's why chapter updates are slow also I won't spoil bit good chapters are coming soon.

good question but the thing is that system is in its basic form not even upgraded into the first level as the level advances more function will open and more flexibly system will work

Thanks and yeah everything is fine now🙂

Muchas gracias por tu consejo, haré todo lo posible.

Thanks, I'll do my best🙂

*not fated

@Iamsunny9 I wrote these chapters way earlier and just revised them, but don't worry soon these chapters are going to end and I'll try my best to bring fun and action things. Also, it's my first novel, so don't expect a pure professional novel, but I'll try my best, lastly, this story is going to be a slow progress one ( Starting ) because I don't want to make too many face smacking and arrogant character plots and scenes so you let Mc develop an arrogant and rude character so if you like please stick with it and if you don't like slow progress at start maybe this novel is fated with you.

Be not

It's not allowed here to use native/original Chinese, Korean, and other similar languages...

They restricted my novel because I used Chinese words to explain the character's name...