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The iron is a Quincy power how did she copy that this plot is getting more and mor ridiculous first the iron doesn’t stop him from feeling pain to suddenly medaka being able to copy powers unique to a special race author I don’t know where you are going with this but so far it is pretty dang bad
Author why is the protagonist such a weakling like he is literally the son of two of the strongest beings in marvel Odin and the phoenix and yet he is so weak compared to the children of Jean grey who mind you had them with cyclops who is nowhere nere as powerful as Odin like if you wanted to do a weak to strong protagonist why did you make him The child of two of the strongest beings it just doesn’t make sense to me and you say he has a talent for physic spells and yet he can barely lift a rock of the ground after years of hard work it just doesn’t add up to me. I will continue to read I just wanted to air out some of my grievances and problems I had with your story I wish you the best