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Vureva1mthCommentedChinese author try not to make protagonist frail and seem weak *Impossible*
A person in a white linen robe with their face hidden under a hat, of average stature and somewhat frail.- Vureva1mthCommentedCh 180 Chapter 180: I'm Built Different
- Vureva3mthReplied to TrueDawn
One month later…..
[Your class 'Civilian' has been changed to 'True Prodigious Blacksmith (Mythic)'.] - Vureva3mthCommentedCh 35 Conversation
- Vureva8mthCommentedCh 479 The Elves
- Vureva10mthCommentedCh 16 Planet Aquamarine
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How is pretty young? Child young? Or adult young? Because no offence I absolutely despise child MCs
[A/N: This is a disclaimer as I don't want to mislead. MC will become the Pope at nearly 50% completion of the novel. He will be pretty young at that time compared to other Popes in history.] - Vureva10mthCommentedCh 76 AHHHHHHHHHHHHH
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The classic hide my powers because plot demands it.
…I didn't really wanna reveal my Aura, so I had to swallow a little bit of my pride here and accepted a little pain. - Vureva11mthCommented
Bored or terrified?
Karliana looked at terrified Estrid; she chuckled at her behavior as they followed Lanlaris to the Citadel of the Zephystrand. - Vureva11mthCommented
Ice magic (nonexistent when necessary)
Even Lanlaris could see that this spar would have ended sooner if Samiel had started casting his spells. But Samiel's Magic was to kill, not to have a friendly spar, as even the most basic spell that he could cast had the potential to tear through someone's mind like paper and put him down into eternal torment of madness. - Vureva11mthCommented
Wonder what he’ll choose, the amazing cool looking things, or the plain unassuming thing. Hmmm….
And the third item was a ruby crystal. From all three items, the Ruby Crystals looked very unassuming and rather ordinary, just like every second gem would look like. The only thing that was special about the Ruby Crystal was the levitating golden parts which were probably functioning as some sort of shield, which would put itself together, creating a ball-like shape as a form of protection for the Ruby Crystal. - Vureva11mthCommented
This is a mess Jesus Christ
As the servants brought the food to the table, Hathor woke up, as she jumped on the table and swiftly located a plate with meat that had a heavenly smell and instantly started devouring everything on that plate. - Vureva11mthCommented
Not introduced her Samiel it’s Samiel introduced her
Introduced her Samiel, as the Divine Elder Cat curiously looked at the High Elven Lord before she hissed in annoyance at the Elf and returned to sleep. Like most cats, Nefertari didn't like when somebody woke her up from her land of dreams. - Vureva11mthReplied to _Monarch
This author Is like that, he deviates from the MC mid way through the story and focuses on a random OC. Check his campione one and you’ll see
This book has been deleted. - Vureva11mthCommented
You just said that
But in the Tower, the closest thing to all human factions was the Magisterium. But alas, Magisterium could be, in many cases, hardly be considered a functioning faction. - Vureva11mthCommented
Bro your writing is killing me I mentally have to correct every paragraph you write. I’ll give you an example, “He raise a undeads army and conquer everything he saw” (not something I saw in the story but it’s more or less the same) If you gonna make people pay for these chapters have the common decency to make the eligible.
Ch 11 Moring Breakfast Talk...