KeithSakura19

can he? will he? i hate harems, cheating and the like

right? how along was she again?

Guessing that you've read more, can you tell me if this story will be the typical 'she the damsel in distress'. Those would have the fl look like she is useless. I'm not into the mafia ones because of that.

remember to add the dialogue like: "..."

quick question, does it have harem. it's looking good till now, but am no fan of those. so before gettibg too deep, I'll like to know

i just started reading this, I don't like harem tho. so before I get too into the story, can someone enlighten me, does it have harem

I haven't even started but I already approved. Why? Cause of the 'no harem'. I hate how there is even a need to have the mc pick up girls everywhere he goes. I have no problem with romance in this stories, but it's quite a let down when it turns into a harem. Especially, when I learn of that AFTER I've read 100 chapters. Everything else could be great in a story but the sudden appearance of a genre you don't particularly like ruins the experience. So yeah, I appreciate the heads up.

Is it a harem? Not looking for those. No offense

You avoided describing, in detail, her initiative to a kiss...changing to his POV there would have been great. Maybe describing her difficulty in managing the newfound ability of hers and doing it slowly with her mate would show the bonding better. And the thoughts of the other pack members when seeing her suddenly power up. You just skimmed through it all. Just an opinion, okay.

...their first night and you ain't describing nothing...why author, WHY.