I think the worst thing is the number of chapters, it takes over 1 week which ends up taking the focus away from the previous chapters, all of Lucas' drama seems like it was 400 chapters because the releases were so slow. I think about 2 or 3 a week would be a good rhythm, so as not to lose quality and keep the public interested. My opinion only.

It's increasingly difficult for WN to find good stories, don't get me wrong, the story had an interesting permission, a world with many possibilities, but in my point of view poorly executed. with an MC who doesn't have a brain that leaves the instincts of their race decide their destiny. as for the “Heroines” it's okay because they are brainwashed so it doesn't matter much, are treated like a piece of meat with no value to history. another thing I noticed was that the MC's personality reflects that of the author, and that's not a good thing here, because what? Just read the chapter comments and you will come to the same conclusion. I don't know other works by the author, but if it's similar to these I have no interest in knowing other works, unfortunately. Summary, A world with great possibilities and a good but misused permission and an arrogant author who does not accept criticism and does not seek to improve.

really frustrating, every "100 chapters" a new story, and now one with 2 MC... That's for the talk of the gods there.

It's very frustrating that MAC only weighs down what it could do and in the end it doesn't do anything either in the other reality or in this one until it changes again. For a while now he has an air of arrogance and superiority but he is at the bottom of the rock bottom in terms of power. [After all, he doesn't commit to gaining exp, and has practically lost all his skills.

many questionable decisions in my opinion. the main one, I think that even though she was his mother, she practically left him to die if she didn't have enough power, if an attack hit a normal person it would at least break every bone in his body, and he patted everyone on the back as if nothing had happened.

I only know Skype, no interaction in NPC history. kkkkkkkk

I just have a question about something that has been bothering me for a long time, about how other people without any system can evolve so quickly. there was an evolution from [F] to [E] that would take 2 months, if you don't focus on the power of the MC, and it took about 7 months at most and there are already many [A] and even some [S] that haven't appeared yet , I don't think it makes much sense in relation to the evolution time. this in relation to humans. Because in relation to zombies, I think it is acceptable that they have a much faster rate of evolution, especially because there are millions of them acting out of instinct to evolve.

Another thing would also be a way to merge titles, or be able to use more than 1, since it is not even human anymore, now I think that certain restrictions would be useless.

taking into account that it has to reach at least level 100 from what I read previously somewhere. A good idea would be to put the Exp in % from 0 to 100% per level, and distributing like a zombie [A] would give 0.10%, a zombie [B] 0.0010 and so on, being more or less like this [ 0.010% of 100%].

I don't even know what to say about this development. ugh!!

aff , nerf...

Obviously this is all just my opinion and there may be people who disagree.

I'm just going to explain one thing here, I know that the story is advanced in chapters, but I'm only leaving a message in the chapters about the chapters and not the story itself, because the story has a good progression of ups and downs, but in a score from 0 to 10 is about 8.7. and the comments on the chapters, I think it's good for the author to have a vision of what the reader thinks of the chapter, so he can improve and get the best out of his story.

As for the MC's father, I hope he's not a hypocrite, telling his son to do this or that, like taking care of enemies or managing the shelter. I'm even in favor of both father and brother being involved, but not having much influence on the development of the MC and the shelter, other than useful things.

I think it was a waste not to have taken all the enemies and sold them, this thing about "They haven't done anything wrong yet and I don't have the right to punish someone just for having ambitions" is pure nonsense, if he hadn't shown up his father I would have died like the girls. They were the ones who will choose that side and that will not change.

ew! Man, this chapter was hard to swallow... code bank, code black... I think it was supposed to be a joke. From the country's hero to someone who was dying of HIV “still a virgin”, man... I should have written a book like that. Let's see how far this idiocy goes, I thought the brother with the hero complex was the pinnacle, but I was wrong. 5 years ago the MC was like 15.. 16 years old lol it's hilarious.

That's my point of view for now. One thing I don't understand is why make powerful skills, classes, titles and then nerf them to fit the plot. For example, preventing him from placing status points, because of the "genes" since he has a class that is a demigod and another that is a herald of god, so his current "genes" would not prevent him from accessing the classes either. The worst thing you can do is have an overpowered character and he ends up limiting himself or being nerfed because of the plot.

I'm becoming more and more disappointed with the MC's attitudes.

I'm becoming more and more disappointed with the MC's attitudes.