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This was a rare opportunity. Scathach was away capturing wandering ghosts, and the guard dog was resting. The exit from the Land of Shadows was like an unsuspecting girl undressing, about to open up to him.- Dominicus3mthReplied to FailedRead
A comma between stop and until should also do the trick. I think.
She remembered how she had given out her location in a moment of anxiety. Now, filled with worry, she regretted her decision, knowing him too well to believe he would stop until he reached her, despite the danger lurking everywhere. - Dominicus4mthCommented
Ironically enough this a good thing for Marie.
"Mmm, isn't that a bit too light? Why stop at just His Highness? Why not all of them?" My words shocked not only Angelica but the rest of the entourage as well.detailThe Hidden Dungeon in the World of Otome Games is Tough For MobsAnime & Comics · SentToOblivion - Dominicus4mthReplied to Arkendros
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'Mhm, don't be a stranger come back anytime.' With that, I walked out of that room and back outside. I needed a break and some time to think.detailThe Hidden Dungeon in the World of Otome Games is Tough For MobsAnime & Comics · SentToOblivion - Dominicus8mthReplied to Daoist9177NN
Or never be not uncomfortable
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Sorry nevermind it’s, you did? That would be correct
"You do?" I replied, thinking to myself almost immediately, of course he does, he's fucking Urahara. - Dominicus8mthReplied to Dominicus
You do? Is also correct
"You do?" I replied, thinking to myself almost immediately, of course he does, he's fucking Urahara. - Dominicus8mthCommented
You have?
"You do?" I replied, thinking to myself almost immediately, of course he does, he's fucking Urahara. - Dominicus8mthCommented
The dozen. Only a dozen stayed out making them the only dozen.
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Or , and got a big fish while at it
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Got a big fish while at it. We don’t start sentences with and
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Well technically the had I put doesn’t have to necessarily be there but worst should be worse
Despite the fatigue, I managed to roll my eyes. Trust this crazy bastard to break the gloom with his peculiar sense of humor. He was worst in person than I imagined, who would've thought? - Dominicus8mthCommented
He was worse in person than I had imagined
Despite the fatigue, I managed to roll my eyes. Trust this crazy bastard to break the gloom with his peculiar sense of humor. He was worst in person than I imagined, who would've thought? - Dominicus8mthReplied to Daoist9177NN
No, bro became capable of fully controlling divine energy and she figured out how to control pure mana. I’d say fully controlling his divine energy is a much bigger feat
Akeno finally gained the ability to control pure Mana. - Dominicus8mthReplied to OmniSage
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He felt a shock go through his tensed body as the connection was made, his pupil dilating to the point his silver irises almost became impossible to see; however he did not waver, in fact, he put more strength behind keeping his position as it was. - Dominicus9mthCommented
Arceus wouldn’t have Wouldn’t= would not Wont= will not
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Sounds like something an invisible mf would say.
'I really should ask her each time we start making out if there are any spirits watching...cuz it would be hella uncomfortable if we're being watched...' - Dominicus9mthReplied to PsanHu Liena smiled and did not respond immediately. Her long legs moved fluidly in a smooth little dance while a spirit fox appeared beside her, and as it did, a furry tail sprouted from her round buttocks, followed by two adorable fox ears perching atop her head. The aura around her changed as if a potent charm had enveloped her. Finally, two yellow Spirit Rings glimmered below her.
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Reckon
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