keep, I don't trust the mtl to keep up good translations.

Ok, I just did a rough Google translation of what you said, so I might be botching what you're trying to say, but him being able to research and experiment to make his own self created Spirit Skills and evolve his Martial Soul may seem kinda out their but I do feel like he wasn't so much given his powers unlike most fanfictions. I haven't read the latest chapters, but from what I remember it took him his whole virtual life to do the thinks he did which to me make it feel like a earned power up so to speak. ============================= Ok, acabo de hacer una traducción aproximada en Google de lo que dijiste, así que puede que esté arruinando lo que intentas decir, pero puede parecer que él es capaz de investigar y experimentar para crear sus propias habilidades espirituales y evolucionar su alma marcial. un poco fuera de lugar, pero siento que a él no se le dieron tanto sus poderes a diferencia de la mayoría de los fanfictions No he leído los últimos capítulos, pero por lo que recuerdo, le tomó toda su vida virtual hacer lo que hizo, lo que para mí lo hace sentir como un poder ganado, por así decirlo.

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Completely agree, all the people who actually read that first chapter and didn't no out seem kinda sus.

Would have to agree, kinda sick of all MC motives just being a quick f##k.

God Tier with that last sentence lol

It says a lot about you that you that all you are is "surprised"... I see a hidden one it seems.

Did think you could delete my review scum bag?

little hint of sexism, there don't ya think.

I meant that the other one has worse quality than this one. Sorry for the confusion.

Nevermind wrong one, but I'm confident that I have read this exact fanfiction a like 7 years ago.

Ya found it on fanfiction.net under the same name at chapter 27. My guys trying to scam you out of money with that Patre@n.

Stolen from "Fanfiction.net" or "Archive of Our Own." not sure which, probably both given that most authors post on both sites. Not sure what it was called but I know for a fact that I have read this on Fanfiction.net.

What don't you understand? I'll dum it down for you so you can understand, a good story = want to read / bad story = don't want to read. Ai doesn't = bad story.

Ya because this translation is better quality.

What's with all you authors thinking it's OK to make the MC pedo's?