It turned out not very convenient, I just forgot about the existence of such a character. After looking through her story, I realized my mistakes. So, all my claims about Elijah are invalid, and as for the city of Volgograd, which for some reason became Stalingrad in the 2000s, this is an absurd mistake by the author, but I hope he will correct it.

Author, thanks for explaining. But this does not change the fact that she ended up in Volgograd. She was born in Germany, so in my opinion, it would be logical to assume that she would have lived there somewhere. But if you want her to live in Russia, then it is better to choose the libt Moscow or St. Petersburg, because she is looking for a "noble" family, and what she does in Volgograd is a mystery. It is one of the most criminal cities in Russia. Also, in addition to Yamoskva and St. Petersburg, one could choose Kaliningrad, in the past Könnigsberg. But this is not my work, so I cannot tell you what to do. But understand, you need to do at least some research before writing about life in a country where you may have never been.

Author, I like your work, but it is worth noting that Ilya is a man's name. Also, Stalingrad was renamed Volgograd in 1961. It is worth adding where this oni-chan postfix came from. What is this nonsense. Do your research first before writing about anything.

And if they still make her their slave ... Let Raiser use his ability to manipulate blood to cleanse her, and if the devils want to interfere in any way, let Raiser blow up some part of the devil's body. Why is it so radical? Because either Raiser will make friends with Akeno, or Jeanne.

The author, thanks for the great work, and as for the question, in my opinion, it is worth choosing the third option. But I also want to add that since Akeno is the daughter of one of the rulers of Gregory, it is worth describing a more aggressive reaction to becoming devil and becoming a sluo than what you described with Kiba. All the same, Akeno is not anyone.

The author is a great piece, but there is a problem. ENOUGH TO USE Enter THROUGH EACH SENTENCE. Thx.

Batman yandere, something new

Greengrass & Delacur & Abbot

Arturia from fate*

Author, I am very glad that you decided to rewrite your work. But could you please delete the previous chapters, this is misleading. I am also very glad that you decided to change the ideology from just killing all Muggles to controlling Muggles from the shadows. Why can't you kill all Muggles? The answer is simple. This is simply impossible, on the planet (at the time of 1990) 5.3 billion and on the strength of 30% are magicians and from 30% of about 20 they are half-breeds whether Muggle-born. Draw conclusions. It seems to me that Gellert should throw this idea, because in custody he had plenty of time to think it over and understand that his desire to kill all Muggles is simply ridiculous by the sheer number of these same Muggles.

Dear author, this is a very interesting piece. Guo thinks we need to change Georg's ideology. Not just annihilate the Muggles, but destroy the leaders of the government and take their places or put puppets. Sometimes to unleash wars between countries, but do not go too far, causing the third world.

I agree with you in everything, except for DBZ and DxD. Kira is too weak for DBZ, there is literally a God who can destroy galaxies with one blow and planets with a snap of his fingers. But DxD, he is strong enough for this universe, the only threat to him can be the Great Red, Ophis and almost the entire Indian pantheon (he is simply too unspoken by the author of the original and therefore the most powerful). But the claim that girls in DxD are too dumb and easily accessible, well, that's not true. Lustful, yes, easily accessible, no. True, this only applies to the race of the fallen angels. And of course, how could I forget Rias bitch. Here she is a bitch and her friend, Sona. not. So I hope Kira can do something with Sona

Author, continue your work in the same spirit. Unfortunately, I have already spent the power stone. But this is not important. I wonder if MC can change reality and make DXD residents perceive the Morningstar family as descendants of the original Lucifer, because MC loves their family, and what is the best guarantor of security? Fear is correct. And I'm wondering who's in the MC's harem? Please add Sona, Gabrielle. All the best.

Author, continue your work in the same spirit. Unfortunately, I have already spent the power stone. But this is not important. I wonder if MC can change reality and make DXD residents perceive the Morningstar family as descendants of the original Lucifer, because MC loves their family, and what is the best guarantor of security? Fear is correct. And I'm wondering who's in the MC's harem? Please add Sona, Gabrielle. All the best.

Dear author, it seems to me that the Weasleys (the guilty ones) should be randomly found dead (what a sadness) as if hinting, it is not safe to contact Lady Ravenclaw's friends. Yes, and the Dark Lord could rage and accidentally find out about this case and break into Hogwarts and punish all the rapists. (Well, tear off what they raped with)

If you say that his girlfriend should be like him, then maybe Hela?

I'm glad there will be a love interest. But can one find out who will be the love interest? A new character or someone from an anime, movie, book, etc? If from there, then you can make a mini harem, 2-4 girls. If you are afraid that you will not be able to reveal them, then do not worry, I advise you to read Ascension or a journey from world to world, cool fanfiction and well-written characters. When I was typing this, I began to guess who would become a romantic interest - Alice or (I do not remember her sister's name something in E) from Chef Soma

Author, I really like your work. Could you say, will there be romance? Not necessarily a harem, at least one love interest. MC has the powers of God, but does not have a harem or little love interest, wrong. But seriously, do what you want, I'm just sure that you will add the service of traveling to different universes for clients (and for yourself)

The author keep up the good work. This is a great piece. So, maybe our dear Alex will come to the wedding with the projection of his army of demons, otherwise it seems to me that Alex will be in a slight anger, that some clan attacked his girlfriend and forced her to marry. And choo to show that it is better not to be on his bad side for retribution will come.

Okay, let's leave that aside. I pointed out that the author acted very stupidly, I hope this can be avoided here. In this work, the author positions the system as a creation of the universe itself to help the MC in becoming a deity. So it is not in her interest to limit the MC. This is where world laws arise, but what can they do with the MC? To kill him? Very funny, he is a phoenix, to be erected after a while and what will the world laws achieve? Nothing. And if they decide to harm Irene, then ... they need it? The world, if it has the Will, will make a powerful enemy for itself.