I prefer a sadistic but affectionnate dom instead of a mean dom and I am not really into sissy ad I prefer pet play (kitten play for example) but it's not bad^^

no actually it can happen especially in this sort of situation however, it is usually not good for the sanity of the child

Apart from the reasons, for her to work that early, that are not explained very well, it's a nice chapter

true but in the world of the story I don't really think they care about it, at least not when they are full of sorrow

this novel is really great, as is this chapter ^^

innocents are always the first casualty in a war

The synopsis made me really interested but I got surprisingly bored quickly . The story lacks common sense. And the rare times the author tries to take care of the mistakes, it involves a very bad plot armoured solution. We won't talk about the depth of the story that is almost non-existent and the fact that the different chapters are linked by your own understanding of the story. It is almost as if it was missing apart from the story. To put it quickly this story is just an addition of random ideas reinforced by plot armour and rushed chapter.

The religion is a bit to close to a catholic types. But it's not a big problem. However they is a lack of depth in this chapter. How come they don't react to Maria's status? How come they aren't curious to the status with multiple interrogation points.

This one was bad. Another huge lack of common sense which was pinpointed by many people already. Frankly I am getting bored of it. I hope the quality quickly changes

Alright this chapter had some funny moments but oh god it was ruined by the lack of common sense in the story. Let's not go into details but really the author needs to think about the story not just write some random ideas and link them with the glorious plot armour that we readers absolutely hate.

So he starts to work at 3 years old ? Not even in the middle age during the darkest period they were doing this. Please think about what you are writing 😭😭

that is overkill? How come mere servants have cyanide poison? And how did it get to it? We won't talk about how he survived from the ingestion of one of the deadliest poison.

Alright Plot Armour is something that is really hateful. I can do this because I have a super spell in me. No No no. This cannot stand. Because if servants can use that rank of magic, what will strong individuals be able to use in terms of power? It clearly is a god mod that is seriously not good. If you want to change something please do it properly. That sort of thing just kills the mood 😫

this chapter is better than the last one. The analysis he is making in the situation is not bad but it could do with a bit more description as it could add some depth to the story. They is no common sense to talk about (a part from the genetic mashup that was made between beast people and demon) because it is a reincarnation. Overall it is not bad but it could be better ^^

I completely agree 😂

First chapter's problem is a big lack of commonsense. I already said what was the problem by commenting some parts but really common sense and human emotions are lacking. The MC is looking like a Robot with a self learning program with only a single chance of success on a super hard mission, it basically the moment.However we have to recognize the author trying to be original on the way the story starts. The story looks promising and if the author progress in the thoughts of his story than it could become an excellent isekai with modern tech novel.

He should be crying in pain from his injuries if he wasn't unconscious. You make it look like a robot which is a bit sad because they is a lot to do with human emotions

alright this is not good at all. He should have died on the spot, please a bit of common sense. A complete destruction of both body is both dramatic and actually more sensible.

World class terrorist leader in an empty room building. This huge elite veteran soldiers didn't think for a minute that something was off? And he wants to use a knife ? Sound like a bad scenario of call of duty to be honest. It would have been more realistic if he had been betrayed.