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I prefer a sadistic but affectionnate dom instead of a mean dom and I am not really into sissy ad I prefer pet play (kitten play for example) but it's not bad^^

no actually it can happen especially in this sort of situation however, it is usually not good for the sanity of the child

Apart from the reasons, for her to work that early, that are not explained very well, it's a nice chapter

true but in the world of the story I don't really think they care about it, at least not when they are full of sorrow

this novel is really great, as is this chapter ^^

innocents are always the first casualty in a war

The synopsis made me really interested but I got surprisingly bored quickly . The story lacks common sense. And the rare times the author tries to take care of the mistakes, it involves a very bad plot armoured solution. We won't talk about the depth of the story that is almost non-existent and the fact that the different chapters are linked by your own understanding of the story. It is almost as if it was missing apart from the story. To put it quickly this story is just an addition of random ideas reinforced by plot armour and rushed chapter.

The religion is a bit to close to a catholic types. But it's not a big problem. However they is a lack of depth in this chapter. How come they don't react to Maria's status? How come they aren't curious to the status with multiple interrogation points.

This one was bad. Another huge lack of common sense which was pinpointed by many people already. Frankly I am getting bored of it. I hope the quality quickly changes

Alright this chapter had some funny moments but oh god it was ruined by the lack of common sense in the story. Let's not go into details but really the author needs to think about the story not just write some random ideas and link them with the glorious plot armour that we readers absolutely hate.