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Quartz563

Quartz563

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2020-07-02 JoinedUnited Kingdom
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  • Quartz563
    Quartz5631mth
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Lollipop

    Ch 1 Chapter 1 - Ordinary’s Luck
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    AK - The Alchemy Kingdom
    Fantasy · DreamWeaverWriting
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  • Quartz563
    Quartz5631mth
    Replied to DreamWeaverWriting

    I've been so excited for the kingdom building and it looks like things are going to be ramping up from here! great work!

    Ch 127 Chapter 127 – Going back
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    AK - The Alchemy Kingdom
    Fantasy · DreamWeaverWriting
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  • Quartz563
    Quartz5631mth
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Lollipop

    Ch 1 Chapter 1 - Ordinary’s Luck
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    AK - The Alchemy Kingdom
    Fantasy · DreamWeaverWriting
    detail
  • Quartz563
    Quartz5632mth
    Posted

    I absolutely adore the work the author has out into fleshing out the mechanics of this world and the magic system, even going as far as to create visual representations of key concepts such as the arrays and the runes as the MC learns or creates then. There's a logical progression of what tools are created and why. My primary gripe with the current writing style would be that certain perspectives shift suddenly, and it takes me a couple of moments to register where exactly we are, but that might be more down to me.

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    AK - The Alchemy Kingdom
    Fantasy · DreamWeaverWriting
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  • Quartz563
    Quartz5634mth
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Lollipop

    Ch 1 A New Beginning
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    Supreme Magus
    Fantasy · Legion20
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