See this! I just gifted the story: Lollipop

I've been so excited for the kingdom building and it looks like things are going to be ramping up from here! great work!

See this! I just gifted the story: Lollipop

I absolutely adore the work the author has out into fleshing out the mechanics of this world and the magic system, even going as far as to create visual representations of key concepts such as the arrays and the runes as the MC learns or creates then. There's a logical progression of what tools are created and why. My primary gripe with the current writing style would be that certain perspectives shift suddenly, and it takes me a couple of moments to register where exactly we are, but that might be more down to me.

See this! I just gifted the story: Lollipop