Nah CZ Delta from Overlord probably one of my favorite character designs

I Already have one book contracted I sort of assumed that this one would be too. However thanks for the offer but I’l wait until I’m contacted again for this one.

Yeah evolution is supposed to happen over generations where the most fit for survival meaning the ones with the most useful trait are the ones to survive breed and those traits are passed down. Though what I did for the talent was kind of fast track it, basically meaning that when they are chosen to be evolved the changes that are most optimal for their survival are put to the front and developed. Like say for example you need to get over a wall or something arbitrary then the evolution would be so that if you decided that you wanted to jump it then the evolution would develop the part of your dna where the makeup of your leg muscles are and change them so that you could jump over that wall. Basically meaning that whenever they evolve they are undergoing their own personal evolution depending on what traits are best for them and how they decide to utilize it.

He didn’t get fame for putting his territory down, it was Aoif that got the fame.

There’s a reason for that

I haven’ actually decided If I want this to be harem or not but right now I’ leaning towards it having one love interest

That was my mistake I wasn’ clear enough what happened was that he used a the highest tier setter core but the lowest tier wood and stone so that averaged out to about tier 5, now if he had used higher quality wood and stone then it would have been tier 1 it’s just that the materials were lacking for it to reach its full potential

Thanks for the review this was my first novel and I was kind of just following tropes for a while, unfortunately I can’t really go back and change that but if you have any good suggestions I’m happy to take them

Shameless author here to leave myself a five star review and tell you guys that I am going to be updating 2 chapter of about 1000 to 1500 words a day unless something unexpected happens.

It goes from tier 9 the lowest to tier 1 the highest

CZ delta from overlord

Lol yeah I could see that I was going for Nemo from FGO cause he was the first character that came to mind when I was creating my mc

Literally translates to big white how is that a good name lol

Yes

FanFiction.Net has a lot of good fan fictions

I remember reading that the lord was actually alaya making sure events happened correctly is that canon or just made up

No

Yeah

Its more like not paying attention. for example “he was oblivious to the situation around him” or “They were talking around him but he was oblivious to them”