Yeah, British people never settled in North America. They are all native XD.

The quest should be more embarissing/difficult for izumi (maybe some ecchi quest if you want the novel to go in that direction)

That's the problem with harry potter SIs. Even if the mc is reincarnated as a house elf, they will inevitably become heir of merlin, morgana and slytherin.

why the black flames? now everyone in konoha should believe that itachi killed some academy student. why didn't she just arrange an accident or frame someone else?

would be at least original. i've never seen a god-like cultivator with realtionship problems.they are always just 'heavenly' beautiful and everyone loves them without question. boring imho

You should make it as messy as possible in my opinion, because real relationships are like that (e.g. Tan Yanyan getting jealous, Xia Zilin doesn't want to share mc, mc sleeps with Tan Yanyan too and breaks Xia Zilin's heart, Tan Yanyan tries to steal mc from Xia Zilin and they become enemies, ...)

mmh, i don't care that much but they seem to have an emotional attachment in this chapter and it makes the whole horecrux thing in harry much more dramatic. also the whole dumbledore thing makes an interesting conflict - dumbledore wanting them together to manipulate harry and their relationship based on distrust of him and harry trying to protect his girlfriend from him.

How about this: - arya was gay in her past life and assumed she is still gay (and has a short relationship with hermione or daphne) but then finds out that she is now straight or -arya gets in a relationship with harry finds out that she is gay and then gets together with daphne

I know it has a yuri tag but can't you make it arya x harry?

You could release your story on other sites.

multiple personality disorder? cool.

i didn't know that this site censored certain words automatically - that's so stupid.

why a pairing for the mc? she doesn't seem like the kind of person who whould comit to a relationship. *** sure, but love?

Mmh, I guess that works too. I just pictured her causing chaos by estrangeíng harry from his parents (they kept twins from each other) and destroying the reputation of the potter (they gave a magical child of a purblood blodline to a muggle orphanage). Well I look forward to what you have planned. By the way why didn't sirius get her?

Thanks for the chapter. If she pretended that she is angry at the potters and that she wants nothing to do with them (especially if she isn't sorted in grifendor) then she could avoid the plot, live unmolested and be free do do what she wants, right? That seems like the best course of action. (she has money from the zombies after all)

Thanks for the story. Will she save harry from the dursleys? Wouldn't that be perfect for a neutral family - she could tell the dark side that they save a wizard from muggles and limit dumbeldores influence and the light side that they saved the boy-who-lived. And it would introduce an interesting relationship between mc and harry.

The sexy jutsu part was funny - poor mc. But woundn't it make more sense that naruto would live with the mc in her house after he was thrown out of the orphanage?

So the mc is a mix between his past live and hinata? That would usually lead to some kind of identity crisis for most people and I think it would be be an interesting aspect for this story, if you wanted to write about that.

Nice chapter. I'm looking forward to when she realize that many little boys have a crush on her.

Will you inlcude pov of other characters (e.g. naruto, sakura,...)?