Seth_Shovan

sharks have hair?

motor oil isn't gas as a matter of fact motor oil isn't even flammable it's made to not be

also flugel are essentially god slayers........ why would he be afraid

yes it should this fic is a great fic

24/7 gaming would be kinda creepy that means 24/7 coverage which includes meals and drink but also includes bathroom breaks i can just imagine tubes being in places they shouldn't be for a teen

technically he can make a prison that kills ppl of old age

I'm confused here aren't the fatui tsaritsas lackeys

well i hope she is a quiet child since she is ya'know mute

so we have a garden conprising of a tree a vine and 2 bush like plants

I mean i get it your trying to build emotional connection between these characters and while that is fine I'm running into the issue of staying with the story it's a story about a Greek myth and so far the upload schedule while not bad isn't substantial to keep attention to the story and while you have a good concept and story on paper it's stagnating in these side stories that take up the 1 chap a day and in the end we get no progress in meeting what was in the synapses Athena regretting her actions Poseidon being well zeuses brother and medusas rejections of them both in favor of whom she moved onto I feel like the story is moving waaaayyy to slow for the Chap size and upload schedule