It's about time they were allowed their honeymoon.

I love this book so far but it needs more chapters! What happens next? I need to know what happens when her old pack finds out who she is and how much her rejected mate kicks himself when his pack finds out she is a queen and the opportunity he screwed up.

I found it quite amusing when the friars who started to resolve for the arrogant wench flipped upon seeing his sister. Too funny. She got what she deserved. If there was a physical, paperbound book of this tale I would gladly buy it.

I love how Lin Jin is making a place for himself within the ER. It will best prove not only his skills but also his competence and the fact he is better than any petty people who are stationed higher than him. I also love how he is making everyone liars without even trying.

A more beautifully painted picture of a rooster evolving I have not read.

I love the descriptions of how a critter evolves. Very beautifully done.

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

If you don't mind I would like that.

Good story, fast paced and engaging. My problem is grammar and word usage. I would gladly edit this to give it a smoother flow.