This is probably my top three favorite fan-fics only complaint is that some of the canon characters aren’t perfect:)

Hahaha, this is the power of friend ship the world is dark and I’m going to show it the job of the king is to fix his kingdom that’ why he can’t be evil or else he wouldn’t be the king that the world needs

The system is a multiplier that doubles or more in the future one of his stats such as strength but has draw backs as it can cause extreme exhaustion or damage if overused/As for his fight style opportunist that will use any body part any item and the environment to fight leading to great fight scenes down the line Thank you for questioning the story:)

As for the love interest maybe I haven’t thought of one but if I do it won’t be for a good bit

I don’t plan on having a big crew as that would make it difficult to write and would make some people upset so it only going to be 7-8 members.

Yeah I probably should have removed that. but I’m going to have some darker things later on and with this it makes it more natural to go to a darker tone

He went to a normal human to almost rear-admiral in less than a year and Ace was 17 while the main character is hasn’t turned 17 yet and their about even if not the main character being a little stronger. As for the personality I plan to develop his personality into a king as time passes

There not that many it was just that island had a lot of them and even the strongest didn’t have a bounty over 50 million as I previously stated that the season Pirates were the strongest with the captain at 55 million Also their will be plenty non OC if I do add any it will only be one or two and they won’t be a big part of the crew

The mom unfortunately will die how she will I‘m not going to say

I already have a plan about how it is going to upgrade I like your idea but it’s been done to many times.

Yea he has a boost permanently but which ability he has changes and if he doesn’t spin the wheel he won’t have a bonus

Because the marines killed his father and forced his mother to the death and Garp wouldn’t tell or bring him to his brother I say it was justified.

Agreed, I was thinking it was too much but considering it was one piece I felt like it wasn’t enough:)

I didn’t want to information dump too much I’ll include it in the next chapter:)

Thank you for your critism, please feel free to correct me it will only help make the story better:)

The bro-con and the sis-con finally meet

Thanks

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