Mee12

the concept of the book is great butbthe execution needs work and the author should go watch and understand the show.

i think she should stop runing and face whats coming

it is easy to see any character in the boys or dc fight there is always something going on so why did he have to show himself

i feel like luke is letting his powers run and not him really controlling it

where is peter in all of this is like the author forgot peter is living with aunt may

does the mc have to kill to take powers. feels like he has been on an none stop killing spree

author you don‘t need to list all his skills every chapter just the new ones it just taking up space

does he really need the infinity stones

is mc a villain

If i was Rory i would talk to him to get this over with