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more like a trust fund baby that wasn't taught how to be responsible. "I'm competitive and smart and oppressed intellectually so i went out and bought a super expensive phone and a new apartment and now my account is negative." yeah.. sounds like it's the govs fault
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i mean realistically, what do you want him to do? travel all across the world specifically to kill every king rank demon on the planet? Assuming he does that, his strength will stagnate since he won't have time to game, and the ones he hasn't killed yet will regress and be unkillable and he will lose his slight advantage before he can capitalize. the paragraph literally starts with "everything has advantages and disadvantages". "a silver lining in every cloud " basically. Seeing the upsides in a garbage situation is healthy. otherwise you get into a bad headspace really fast. it's not as if he's advocating for more demon kings or anything. on top of all that, y'all are basically suggesting he has a moral obligation to save the world because he might be able to. there is definitely an interesting debate there, but it is by no means black and white.
lol US making cyborgs . seems legit tbh
dudes just gonna get fat on that diet.
the dude changes his cultivation technique every few paragraphs. he isn't gonna sweat a few rats
an old Chinese provenrb
next it'll be the green phoenix fern cultivation technique
not the first time, but nothing is consistent here. supposedly everyone hates him, so Maria would be more likely to make a comment about Alex not being worth it. honestly, Apathy is a more likely emotion for someone that is worthless. you have to generally do something to get everyone to hate you. they don't just say "man, this dude doesn't get good grades or have any skills. i hate him. let's go beat him up." BUT, if that is what they decide to do in your meritocracy, it should be consistent. otherwise it is even more jarring and hard to get into.
dumping stat points to run to the store lol
To be fair, it is arguable that few would dare rebel again. They will know that if Noah is involved, their bargaining chips will do nothing to save them.
this makes 0 sense... teleporters are transporting your atoms and reassembling them. that is how they transport you so fast.. if everything is broken down to that level, being in a hover bus is not gonna keep you from dying if the spatial rings are that rough. it would only be usable on inorganic material
that's crazy they suspected him. only the entire school knew he was gonna fight the 1 dead kid who was always with the 2 mostly dead kids. I can't imagine why his 'cover up' wasn't very productive
complete roll of the dice, yet it said earlier that the cannoneer was a intentionally counter picked for him based off their knowledge of his pilots preferences
her name was Alyssa Fill before.. she have an alter ego or sloppy writing?
A monkey with a cannon is better than a sniper with a gun?... debatable, but ok
suspension of disbelief would be a good route here. if it's too much, just drop the novel
I mean if you really want to start questioning everything, why not start with "why have we figured out either light speed travel or warping, and have instantaneous communication galaxy wide, but mechs are the best we can do?" (such travel/communication would have to be possible to support what we have been told so far)
dude I knew something was off! as soon as she said there were parts of the body that could be eaten I assumed she meant fingers. I wasn't expecting it to escalate that fast tho
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