Bruh the nation is desperate and struggling , but that’s all you care abt? Haven’t you had enough money already?

Omgggggggggggg

The story is really ii good, but I dont see a lot of character development of both the main and side characters. And that’s kind of a waste of potential. This is just my opinion, and the kinds of novels I usually like to read, so it’s up to you, ig. Perhaps, if you want to go in this direction, giving different characters’ pov and having some fluffs would help.

No,? I think the story is flowing nicely. And the world structure is solid good. You did a great job 👍🏻

Yes, it’s good to see inspirational mc’s. I learned a lot

That’s a huge buff tho, (in gaming terms)

Really like their relationship rn

Your novel is really good! I like reading it. It’s now my daily novel which I read often. Thanks for writing !

Hm sed

Are these spoken by the same person? If it’s, it’s confusing to separate them

In*

This is a really good read! I can feel the realisticness of the characters. Thank you for the chapter!

So confusing read

He’s practically overpowered already TT

The lower your potential is*

XD

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XD true

Yup, that one

Isnt the name versailles?