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Aaron_Caloza1yrCommentedi hope to see this "intruiging" "Novel" stay's afloat whilst the sea's rage with terror as tis era has forcome to us all , hopefully you won't fall off . PS: if you need help like getting idea's or whatnot try your best and make a basic structure and the laws of your "wrealm" for a few moments taking notes here and now , might help you when you ask for outside help .
Ch 1 discontinued- Aaron_Caloza2yrCommented
i really hope the chapters get long
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why cant it be KMPH?
This chapter has been deleted. - Aaron_Caloza3yrCommentedCh 16 Chapter 16
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WTF HOW?
But the look on his face did not change the slightest. He pointed to the induction cooker on the car kitchen behind him: "Then I will cook dumplings first. If you are bored, you can watch the car TV. If you want to take a bath, the little one behind you You can also take a shower in the bathroom, but the water flow shouldn't be too great." - Aaron_Caloza3yrPosted
so im in chapter 13 currently and basically the damn rv is allegidly larger or wider than what a rv is small while lets add some more chaos now, THE CREATER MADE THEM ALL GENDER FLUID BASICALLY the story is nearly or constantly derailed and he has crap ton of problems like the DAMN GRAMMER is dead, STOP USING GOOGLE TRANSLATE ALL THE TIME ITS GOOD AT TRANSLATION AND NOT THE GRAMMER OF FULL SENTENCES stop and get some help auther you seriously need some help you also might wanna use fiver for the translation and help, aswell as skillshare wich may help you in translation long term now fiver is cheap sometimes its all usally below 1000 or 100 skillshare is basically a learning place but there is a subscription etc its basically not free to use.
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is this the dinensional space or how messed up and all over the place your writing is?
In addition, there is a 40-inch TV on the side of the car body that is embedded in the middle of the wall, facing the sofa in the living area. As for the kitchen, all kinds of cooking utensils are available, including induction cooker, microwave oven, and cooker hood. All are big foreign brands. - Aaron_Caloza3yrCommentedCh 12 Chapter 12 Seizing the Crystal Core
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howd he get that?
It was at this time that Han Feng roared, and then jumped off the roof of the RV, and took advantage of the trend to pull out the tactical saber made of carbon steel that was inserted at his waist, and rushed towards the "brain". Command-type zombies with a wide open hole. - Aaron_Caloza3yrCommented
just how advanced are we in?
Faster than infantry, more flexible than tanks and able to carry a variety of weapons, they nonetheless required much less supplies to keep them running. Their logistical footprint was a fraction of what a conventional army gobbled up. This alone ensured that mechs dethroned all other service branches. - Aaron_Caloza3yrCommented
wasnt bite level 2 already?
Skills: Terraform(II), Bite, Heat Sense(III) - Aaron_Caloza3yrCommented
there are much more better wepons than that
However, that was not enough for what he had in mind, which was to get more hosts from the South Zone, so he had to learn the Phantom Trace, buy some items and use a metal bat as well as the Wind Control to protect himself. - Aaron_Caloza3yrCommentedCh 337 Blocked Breakthrough
- Aaron_Caloza3yrCommentedCh 9 Pizza talk
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take rest, but pls sill update well atleast you have an stable update
Two chapters today. I'll try to post two chapters tomorrow again, but I'm not sure. A bit busy lately...