Gula23

Mascherano was more of a cdm

She got that from Blackbeard

Just very cringe, plot bounces around everywhere, no buildup no context.

Definitely written with chat gpt, just useless big words

I had high hopes for this but then the mc is actually an idiot, when he’s fighting 7 big cats one of them has poison resistance that would make it take an hour for his poison to take effect, he knows this yet instead of taking that chance to poison all the other animals he waits for an hour and then the one he poisoned warns the other ones and it makes the fight a lot harder. Just bad writing

Just not worth the read, most of not all of the 5 star ratings are definitely fake, no sense of progression, bad math, idiot mc, enemies getting massive powerups just so they can compete with mc. If you turn your brain off remove it from your head and blend it with a blender, then maybe you can enjoy this story. Good idea but just terrible execution, also everybody hates the mc for some reason.

Just doesn’t make sense, he wanys to sleep all the time to get stronger, but when he finds out he can level up by killing things he doesn’t, he says he wabts to sleep to level up but it would take him seconds to kill all the enemies and get much more experience. But what can you expect from a Chinese Webnovel such as this one. Long story short this story has absolutely ZERO redeeming qualities, don’t even try it it’ a waste of time.

Just not good, at one point it is stated he is almost as strong as the vice principals, but then later on when he is according to himself like twice as strong, all of a sudden he is way weaker than the top students. There is just no continuity. Also he sexually assaults and maybe rapes a girl so yeah, don’t waste your time.

Not sure if it will be explained later, but when Nick is “killed” it was stated in earlier chapters that they can repair body parts and she also has a healing factor. And why would general tenant not evacuate her when he found out she was still alive. I’m at chapter 127 so I don’t know if it will be explained later but I could not wait any longer to comment on the perceived plotholes.

Never reviewed before but there were just some glaring issues. It’s an interesting story with potential and a fun read, but the amount of plot holes is jarring. Many times in the story the author talks about powerful beings not being able to interfere in the games, yet the games and specifically Elliot get interfered with constantly from outside sources and nothing is done about it by the games commission. While the power system and beast taming aspects are pretty cool, the author just rushes through some parts of the story and does not fully think about how certain events affect the story. The constant interference was just the main issue I had with the story, there are others but they are much less impactful. The story’s got potential, and if the author can fix some of these issues they may have a real gem in this story.