holy sheet, that was amazing, you covered all of this part of the story perfectly and it was something original and not clichè. you covered all loose ends and it was just great. 10/10 prologue please keep up the good work

I'm only up to chapter 13 so i can't say anything about the rest of the book, but so far i have enjoyed it quite a lot, even though it is different from my usual action-fantasy books I read, but it's a nice change of pace. - So far the writing quality is very good, few mistakes here and there but nothing major, the writing style is consistent and goes into detail but not to much that it's overwhelming. - I don't have anything to say about the stability of updates, but what i can see it seems pretty consistent. - So far i enjoy the development of the story is peaceful and slow paced which is a nice change from the fast paced action based stories. this book focuses on character detail, but not to a boring state, so far i have found it enjoyable. - I think i summed up the character design basically in the last sentence :) - The world background is simple as it is just based of the real world or a very similar parallel world so nothing much to day 'bout it. overall a great slow paced, slice-of-life story, so if you like that style of are looking for a change of pace, i recommend this to you. :)

I quite enjoy this book so far, it's far from what I would normally read but it's quite interesting. I give you my thumbs up. I know this comment will most likely go under the radar since the chapters are way ahead, but i'll say thank you for writing this book as it has caused me enjoyment, hope you don't stop writing it, thank you :)