Amazing story. I loved the og version and I like the rewrite even more. Quite literally the only complaint I have is that there isn’t more chapters. Best fanfic I’ve read in a significant time.

I’m a little late but I’m very excited to see the changes made to this story along with it’s continuation! I loved the original and I’m sure I’ll love this. Happy reading all ^^

Regardless of what others are saying (especially about the romance aspect) I enjoy this story very much. I like mc’s personality and his relationship with his wives. I enjoy romance in stories like this and I will most certainly continue to read it. Good luck to you and Godspeed mr author. :)

Hello world my review time. I’m really liking the story more so than the last version grammer and spelling are good enough to ignore the mistakes, the romance is hehehe enjoyable his personality and background are enjoyable to me as well. Overall personally I enjoy it, no more rewrites please :(

I’ bored and this is my seccond time reading this so here goes As Mirio phased through me for what could be considered the 10 time I was fed up. Dashing past him I restricted his body “What is this” Mirio was confused he had never felt this before, it was as if his body was stopping itself from moving forward. “You feel it, right?” The look of confusion was amusing from one considered one of the “Big Three” of UA. “What is inside you?” Confusion spread over the crowd “bones, organs, veins, but what is inside all of those?” You could see some among them realize as fear of what was to come spread over their faces. “Blood! Your blood is your enemy!” At that moment Mirio veins contracted as his blood rushed throughout his body. He didn’t even have time to scream, the pain was to much to bear and he passed out. (My revision of part of it)

We can pretend

HAIL

Good for you I’m 16 and 5’ 7

With the puke still on her?

The fact that this exist disgusts me. I agree with the other comment, you want this to happen to you and there IS something wrong with you. no offence but really, did you need to make this.

Late, but with this its more of a eh why not kinda thing, ya know?

We must be, for if we are not so then the author may return to his…. 15 day slumber. And yandere sect had such a huge cliff hanger.

Like the chapter but if possible just a little less HOW DARE YOU TOUCH MY WIFE (killing intent killing intent) cringe stuff <3

Late but it makes sence for this her we can see her will and well its AU anyway so

Little late but he really didn’t say anything he should not have its kinda obvious for one and its not like theres much to hide about it anyway

Yep karen here how ya know, and no ive not watched the animation and dont plan to, i never said you were wrong about anything you were saying it was just a little annoying how you treated a fiction that was in my opinion quite good because of how he portrays batman. Because well if you didn’t know this story is about a man making yanderes… hes raped by ww ffs if you have such a problem with how hes showing batman or the justice leauge to be then why not have a problem with that too…

Can u go suck of Bman somewhere else

Little late but