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Ice_Wielding_Ronin

Ice_Wielding_Ronin

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Spent most of my time reading and critiquing work of other people. I always have loved reading and finally decided to make this account to post my own stuff, so I can be on the other end of the rope.

2020-06-25 JoinedArgentina
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  • Ice_Wielding_Ronin
    Ice_Wielding_Ronin1mth
    Commented

    What happened to F canon?

    But what he can do about it. Tell her that you are going against the wishes of the almighty creator Kishimoto Sama.
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    In Naruto With Minato Template
    Anime & Comics · kamidemond
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  • Ice_Wielding_Ronin
    Ice_Wielding_Ronin1mth
    Commented

    This statement is wrong. You quite literally made Evan 10 years older than Erza. So he should be around 21, rather than 11. Author doesn't even know how to track his MC's age sheesh

    "Evan is too young. No matter how powerful Evan is, he is only an eleven-year-old kid. If he is chosen, what will Ishgar think of us?! They will think that we are old and blind..."
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    Fairy Tail: Collapsing Stars
    Anime & Comics · nyawdao3
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  • Ice_Wielding_Ronin
    Ice_Wielding_Ronin1mth
    Commented

    I don't get it. Isn't evan like, 10 years older than Erza? And Erza is around one or two years older than Natsu and Gray, right? So why does the author write as if Evan wasn't in his early twenties currently?

    "Of course, I'll give him a good meal. It's better for Evan to keep out of contact with that kind of dubious person! Otherwise, Evan will easily become that kind of person when he grows up!" Irene stroked gently. Touching Evan's small head, she asked in a low voice, "Speaking of which, won't Evan become such a person when he grows up?"
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    Fairy Tail: Collapsing Stars
    Anime & Comics · nyawdao3
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  • Ice_Wielding_Ronin
    Ice_Wielding_Ronin1mth
    Commented

    Drop the corny sound effects please.

    rotation !!
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    Its a world of blending with group chat
    Anime & Comics · Akasaki_Ryujin
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  • Ice_Wielding_Ronin
    Ice_Wielding_Ronin5mth
    Commented

    What is with this sudden way of complicating your writing? No teenager talks like that, not even in the 1700s/1800s

    Ch 54 CHAPTER 54
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    Magic Swordsman In One Piece (D&D)
    Anime & Comics · KuroWashi1903
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  • Ice_Wielding_Ronin
    Ice_Wielding_Ronin5mth
    Replied to KareAiza

    In Argentina, for example, undergraduate degrees, as well a regular uni study courses, all take 4 years. The only way a course takes 2 years is if you are taking a masters AFTER you finished your study courses.

    I moved on and chose nursing to study since I never really had a passion for anything other than volleyball and my science marks were pretty good so I decided to apply to some programs. I studied for 4 years and got my diploma alongside some PTSD of studying a week before your final and trying to cram as much info in your head as possible.
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    The Angel Spoils Me On My Way To The Top
    Anime & Comics · _Kirirei_
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  • Ice_Wielding_Ronin
    Ice_Wielding_Ronin5mth
    Commented

    That is a video I would watch. "Trying A5 Dragon Wagyu"

    After working with Grayfia for about twenty-five minutes, James finally got all the meat separated. Then, he used a single grill for each cut. There were ribs, tenderloins, shank, chuck, brisket, which he bought a special magic smoker for, and many other cuts.
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    High School DxD: Scattered Cherry Blossoms
    Anime & Comics · SixthSense1029
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  • Ice_Wielding_Ronin
    Ice_Wielding_Ronin5mth
    Commented

    Never have I read a Fanfic that made me dislike Sirzechs more than Rias, neither make me like Falbium. Awesome.

    "Don't be a hypocrite, Sirzechs." Falbium said. "We all get that you're feeling insecure with James growing so quickly. Your pride can't handle it, we all get it. But don't act like you would be any different if Rias were the one in danger."
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    High School DxD: Scattered Cherry Blossoms
    Anime & Comics · SixthSense1029
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  • Ice_Wielding_Ronin
    Ice_Wielding_Ronin5mth
    Commented

    Sorry but I already don't like him disguising as Obito. Always hated this kind of stupid thing.

    Ch 145 Blackbeard
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    Journey to the One Piece
    Anime & Comics · thelightedghost
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  • Ice_Wielding_Ronin
    Ice_Wielding_Ronin9mth
    Commented

    There are 32, because Aloy doesn't count.

    Pop Quiz of the Chapter: How many five star characters are there in Genshin Impact?
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    Genshin Impact: A Shadow's Tale
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  • Ice_Wielding_Ronin
    Ice_Wielding_Ronin9mth
    Commented

    Hmm... my favourite character just HAS to be Kazuha!

    Ch 2 Catching Up With a Friend
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    Genshin Impact: A Shadow's Tale
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  • Ice_Wielding_Ronin
    Ice_Wielding_Ronin9mth
    Commented

    Nice intro! You could've maybe gone deeper in the physical description of the character, but I guess you can do that next chapter no problem.

    Ch 1 Same Old Teyvat
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    Genshin Impact: A Shadow's Tale
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  • Ice_Wielding_Ronin
    Ice_Wielding_Ronin9mth
    Commented

    Trails.

    Or still mostly focus on Trails for now?
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    A Gamer Into Trails
    Anime & Comics · Aht
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  • Ice_Wielding_Ronin
    Ice_Wielding_Ronin10mth
    Replied to ChaosV

    basically, but more medieval I guess?

    Currently wearing the outfit I had prepared for the banquet, a long black coat over a black shirt and black pants.
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    Shadow Monarch in Tensura
    Anime & Comics · TheRandomMe
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  • Ice_Wielding_Ronin
    Ice_Wielding_Ronin10mth
    Commented

    It's definitely not a bad story but it feels somewhat... pointless. I feel like it lacks... epicness? I don't know if that is the correct word, but I haven't felt any excitement since the first 2/3 chapters.

    Ch 29 Chapter 29: 1,000,000
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    Shadow Monarch in Tensura
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  • Ice_Wielding_Ronin
    Ice_Wielding_Ronin10mth
    Commented

    Finally... finally someone who just takes the position!

    Ch 113 Chapter 106 - A Simple Talk.
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    Fairy Tail: Shinigami
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  • Ice_Wielding_Ronin
    Ice_Wielding_Ronin10mth
    Commented

    Someone who hates those who needlessly hide their powers, finally! My kindred spirit!

    [Master, a protagonist chosen by both the world and Fate, is the strongest one obviously, you can consider them as those OP reincarnated protagonists who always have everything easy and hide their real power for braindead reasons, a Hero reborn, a Demon King Reborn, and Immortal reborn are an example of this. They might also possess the second, third, or fourth type of system that I discussed earlier.
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    Fate/Poseidon
    Anime & Comics · Akros_Zero
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  • Ice_Wielding_Ronin
    Ice_Wielding_Ronin11mth
    Commented

    then don't hype him up that much.

    I can't keep writing fights and continue the story if some of you put your expectations too high on the bar and complain about the strength level he's 'supposed' to be at. Just please calm down for a second, we'll get there. Just not right now.
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    Bleach: Another Story
    Anime & Comics · some_writer
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  • Ice_Wielding_Ronin
    Ice_Wielding_Ronin11mth
    Commented

    I always found it weird when writers used "Kaa-chan". It just sounds weird. Even more so coming from a 15/16 year old teenager. It's like being 16 and still saying "mommy" like a kid in kinder.

    "So, Kaa-chan, where did you go this past week?" He started a conversation with a curious tone.
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    Kuroko no Basket : The Sixth Man of the Seirin Basketball Team
    Anime & Comics · Zeta_Faes
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  • Ice_Wielding_Ronin
    Ice_Wielding_Ronin1yr
    Commented

    I've been wondering for a while... Harry never mentioned having a Persona or going to any Megami Tensei world, right?

    Eri then pointed her staff to them and then softly said "'Megido'".
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    Harry's New Game Plus
    Book&Literature · Kurogano
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