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Don't rely on gpt. It makes your writing more predictable. Personally, The feeling of reading human text is more enjoyable. I hope to see more

Nooo go back to the old cover pic

Why not make it so that they progressively lose it? That way it can get attributed up to old age

Characters aren't portrayed correctly, and they seem to bow to the whims of the protagonist. An example of this is when Peter and Gwen come over to visit him in the lab. He asks for their blood, and Gwen happily gives it to him. Peter refuses, which in my opinion is a very understandable decision, after all, who would randomly allow someone to draw their blood? Gwen sees this and her first reaction is "Man this guy probs has aids lul". Like wtf.

Honestly, a lot of the plot points are utter garbage. Just feels like the characters do whatever the author wants them to, which I mean is cool and all, but when the character randomly changes motivations, it's a little weird. For example, the mc's whole family died cuz of some firebenders, so he goes on a killing spree. That's fine. He meets up with the avatar and a little while afterwards, kills a bunch more people. The avatar tried stopping him, mc gets knocked out. Alright cool, that's fine. But shortly after waking up, this man changes moods and stops hating on firebenders. Meets up with ty Lee, Azula and then just FUCKING JOINS THEM. In the recent chapter as I'm writing this, he's lighting up the dai li. This is after killing sokka btw, which was weird already cuz he knew the guy. About the Azula thing, the author hasn't really written anything about this but he's like putting hints that the mc is gonna take over the royal family and stuff, and that's fine, but why does he have to make this whole convoluted plot to gain power. Lastly, why is the mc's power level fluctuating so much? Like hell be fine fighting against ten people, but then randomly he'll just start losing. Last of the last, why does he keep either making up these elaborate background or over explaining his actual origin?

Nice.

But I'm not a doctor, so you should go get it checked out after a couple days.

Had a similar issue. It might be your posture, eye strain, or you might just need to go outside for a walk.

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