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Nothing wrong with being fluffy, It's just a tiresome to see the only friend the Mc has to be chubby.
Please Author to Vanilla to sell his body, Besides only men would buy him
This feels like a Woman's writing
Bruh definitely 6" ft mandatory always compensating
You've done enough Explaining move the story along mate.
Tines like this I'd prefer he had a system then I could hate it instead of the Mc
Look just say you remember the things you like.
You know it's really hard to get with this "antagonist" he to evil
Drama is fun when its natural for the story, other than that it literally pointless
Can't we have a strong female lead who doesn't obsesse over a guy?
So he also chose a bow... Freud qiuld have field day
Wait... didn't he get disowned? And it was sexual assault and they keep specifying that **** didn't happen so... There wouldn't be any hard ramifications, it's enough that everyone thinks he force himself on a women.
I still don't understand how he got disowned if they were the same age, if he got away with it then hee anger at him would be justified. Ahhh what do I know I not a women.
So logically Noah should give in, Emotionally Lucas would keep fighting. So Noah is not the dominant personality.
I hate to admit but thus has gone to straight up self insert fanfiction. I can have friends if I want too it's no big deal or anything.
I don't understand his motivation like why are you doing what he asks???