What up, fellow broski, I’m the type of person that likes writing more then the story I’m writing.
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Read to the latest chapter- at the start it was confusing because I didn’t know if this was mainly a cultivation novel or sci fi novel?-now I understand it a blends between the two, Pros-One of you main strengths in writing is how you set the tone between each character, by the way they talk and how they are different and unique for example the beast men how this primal and not so educated way of talking, while the system is act like an ai, yet is starting to show more human emotion! Very well done. Another pro is the worldbuilding very smart of you to use the ai to scan the world, maybe focus on adding detail on the surrounding environment and make it unique don’t make it similar to earth.But the way you make the natives have their own faith, tradition is very good. Con-Not an fan of force romance. P/s this is not really a review just a small comment
Good writing! Well thought out, but was a bit confused on the setting in the first ten chapters, was really confused on the multiple POV. First novel I read where you get the POV of a system. Overall would rate 3.8, but I round it up. To 4 Keep it up author!