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What I noticed most was the change in the name of the healing potion, I didn't see any errors that really affected the reading, at least for me. good job !
This story is very good, and about a transmigrant who decided to use science to study the magic of the world of HP, despite some translation errors and the Chinese names for some things, it is legitimate and well written.
The story starts from a somewhat dubious but interesting premise, and develops in a very satisfying way, with Harry no longer being a guided and stupid character to taking on the real protagonist in the magical world, maintaining the necessary caution to survive and discover who They are his enemies and who he can trust.