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I don't know what to make of this, it's just too fast, I liked the idea of the restaurant, it's interesting how it connects to other worlds, but it's just that. You can't enjoy it if you go so fast, what you could have implemented is to introduce the characters at a slow pace, not so fast, so that the MC knows them and interacts with them.
it's good, the evil MCs are amazing and I like them better than the passive MCs.This story has potential, I look forward to where it will go.
i need moressssss
I don't know how to start..... I just find the character's behavior very stupid, I mean his actions haven't been the most reasonable until now and I don't think they will be in the future.your writing is good, but the plot of this is rubbish.I don't understand how there can be people who can like this well everyone has their tastes