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This is hot garbage, terrible grammar aside, character development is shit, Mc can be compared to a bag of rocks in terms of character and the bag of rocks would come out looking even better. Mc has a system and everything is handed to him with ease, to the point he's already kicking Kaidos ass. No challenge, no development. Just 0 to 100. Then there's the grooming. First time reading Mcs PoV and he's making out with Yamato, his sister and she's 5 at the time. literally like the first sentence from his PoV. Then he starts feeling up her thighs and she's goddamn moaning. At 5. With her 'Juices' on him by the end of it. Some serious degenerate shit. If you've read the synopsis and come for Mc x Yamato, this is not one you'd enjoy at all, Yamato may as well be Mcs doll. Wish Fulfillment to the extreme.
Why does this feel like basic garbage dialogue of some translated wuxia/xianxia novel?
So he's got an inner monologue running?
Reminds me of 'A Series of Unfortunate Events'. Every book began in a similar way
Truly, not ugly. just a few additions is all...
I wonder if she can tell something is trying to summon her.. I can't wait til they meet, and now Harry can read a person on a deeper level, hopefully his mum actually cares.
Why the change is dialogue format?
Right now it's rather lame, however it can be taken to the extreme and it would be busted. How? If you've read the Legendary Mechanic, there's an Esper with Carbon Manipulation as his ability, and as you can guess, he's busted. Just turns swaths of people into dust like it's nothing. Even if Mc can take it to the extreme like that Esper was able to, if he focuses on it, it'd be crazy strong. Unfortunately Mc is rather frivolous/indecisive in behavior and we don't get much of an explanation for his abilities other than he did it and figured it out making it much less satisfying of a read in comparison to some of the more technical HP fanfics that delve into the magics.
If you combine Alkahestry and Transmutation do you get a bootleg biomancy?
Citadel doesn't acknowledge anything magical tho?
For Planetos it may be a bit different considering the constantly shifting durations of seasons.
'said inside his head' is thought.
Alright lads, for this one you must have your brain turned off. If not your brain will melt away in frustration at the nonsense you will read here. Not recommended even if you like ATLA /Korra fics because this one doesn't give a flying fuck about any lore or background knowledge, they'll make that kinda shit up as they go.
No, it's a pretty good translation, hence the ?. Just a few words here and there that feel out of place.
So he goes Super Saiyan when he summons the sword, but without it he's incompetent asf? Pretty lame
So his semblance will be trash according to the system? Even with dragon influence on it?
Tbh his Abilities are rather Op. Especially since he's not a servant and is the real, unrestricted deal. Can spam Excalibur with the regen a Dragon Core provides. Heals hella fast, he just needs to improve his combat skills and he's pretty much untouchable..