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Raphael talks wayyyyyy to much its annoying

I love this book. It's the first time I have seen a Christian Oc or SI in general and as a Christian it brings me joy and hope. Plz keep up the good work

Why do the say "seventh scorcher"when swearing it sounds weird as hell

Remake your chapters with proper spacing and paragraphs. No one likes to read a wall of text

Stop delaying and get on with it

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This story was short and sweet. Great stuff I loved how it started and adore the ending. Thank you for sharing this with us.xdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxd

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I like how the story is being allowed to grow though I wonder if tom is going to face any serious does before the start of the mcu canon events ?

I love how unique the story is but I do believe it could do with a bit more world building and character depth. And the english while not the best is far from the worst I have had to endure on this site