Sariel_Surya
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thanks, I will definitely do. And for the late reply.
everything is good but I think intial part need a bit more detail, and the development of the story is going really good. And it's nice to hear from you after a long time ash.
it's good, it can be continued to long run though. The narration is good and the story development too . the story has quite a turn of events.